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Title: [Part V] The Spooky Door
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GoldenSama - June 1, 2007 04:37 AM (GMT)
(SK&WS): The Spooky Door
The Next Great SK&WS Mini-Series Special Event

Sama Says: Biiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiig delay. I know. >_> I suck.

Episode V: The Spooky Door




“Where are we going?”

The stranger who had saved her life had not said a word since they escaped from the Military Base. The enigmatic TS made no move to inform Tazzy of what was going on. She was beginning to become uneasy. This guy had helped her out, but in this town being a Flan-I was a dangerous thing.

“I'm taking you to see my boss.” TS said, keeping his eyes on the road.

Tazzy could have overpowered him. It wouldn't have been too hard. Then again, this guy might be connected to the weird events that had been happening. The K-Tower had been burnt down and for some reason the Global Defense Force was after them. None of it made much sense, but what happened next was the most shocking thing yet for Tazzy.

The car stopped in an empty parking lot and TS switched off the engine. He looked over to his right where a man was leaning against the wall. The man wore a hat pulled down on his head, dark sunglasses and the lower portion of his face was covered by a scarf. Next to him stood a woman with an orange shirt and green shorts. She was wearing goggles over her eyes.

“Ah... welcome, Tazzy.” The man smirked.

“Eh!? You . . . but aren't you . . .”

“Evil? No . . . not anymore.” Phazon's voice drifted across the empty parking lot and he slowly walked forward. It was hard to tell who he was given the elaborate disguise, but a Flan-I of his strength was easy to sense. “Although he does not completely trust me yet, Spoony agreed to let me help.”

“I don't get it . . . what's going on?” Tazzy was really getting confused. Maybe her amnesia was coming back.

“Rikku, can you explain things to her? I have to go contact the Spoon.” Phazon turned around and disappeared into the shadows, quickly becoming masked from sight by the ever looming darkness of night.

Tazzy turned her attention to the blond – Rikku – who smiled to her in a friendly manner.

“It all started a few days ago . . . in the desert. . . I was part of an Al Bhed excavation team. I guess you already know the legends about the Desert of Desserts, don't you?” Rikku asked.

Tazzy nodded slowly. “Well . . . I know some of the story . . .”

“It's an old one.” Rikku replied. “Apparently, two young men and a young woman once found a Giant, Magical Door in that Desert . . . and behind that door they learned the secrets of Flan, Custard and Pudding. But . . . back then, the desert was a beautiful valley, full of life. After the door was opened . . . it became a lifeless desert by the next day.” Rikku's voice became quiet.

Tazzy nodded. “I've heard those stories . . . they say that Pepper and Pibb were the two men from the legend, though I've never heard what happened to the woman.”

“Her name was Pepsi.” Phazon had returned from the shadows, his hat and scarf no longer needed and now removed. His usual sunglasses remained in place, though. “Apparently, she was caught in a love triangle with both Pepper and Pibb. I don't know what happened to her, or how she was involved with what happened to Pibb and my old master.”

Rikku went back to her original point. “Anyway, the reason I asked if you heard those stories was because I found that magical door in the desert! It's what my people call 'Dra Cbuugo Tuun' . . . The Spooky Door.”

Phazon nodded. “Apparently the Spooky Door from Al Bhed lore is the same as from Flan-I legend. Rikku found it in the desert . . . it was the next day that I was attacked and had my evil stolen . . . and, well, you know the rest of the story.”

“Yeah.” Tazzy agreed. “So . . . I don't understand. Whose TS, why did you send him to find me, and what does any of this have to do with the Door?”

Phazon sweat dropped. “Oh . . . well, TS is a student of mine, as HA was . . . for some reason all my students are letters . . . anyway, I sent him because I sensed that you were in trouble. You saw CHoW didn't you?”

“Yeah! CHoW was there! That lousy metal-headed jerk . . . what's he got to do with all this?” Tazzy inquired.

“Those people with him are the Global Defense Force. They're job is to protect the world from evil. Apparently CHoW has tricked them into thinking he is actually Wonder Sama . . . how he did that is anybodies guess . . . but the point is, he's freed a old weapon called the Eclipse ARK Cannon . . . and now he's going to use that weapon to destroy Teh City.”

“Mmmhmm . . . and is CHoW working with that weird guy who Kimi and Sama fought?” Tazzy asked.

Phazon shook his head. “No . . . that guy . . . I have no idea who he's working for.” Tazzy fell, anime style, at this revelation. Phazon coughed. “But, you know, I'm sure it's someone evil. Anyway, right now we have to stop CHoW from destroying everyone!”

Tazzy paused. “Yeah . . . you're right, it's just . . .”

“It's hard to trust me?” Phazon raised an eyebrow.

“Well, you WERE the biggest villain of all.” Tazzy reminded him.

“Yes, yes I was . . . but I have no desire to do evil. I don't really have a desire for good, but . . . I feel like I have to help. Whether that makes me a hero or not, I actually don't care.”




“Excuse me . . . aren't you Super Kimi?”

Kimi was having a lousy enough time already. It was annoying to think that Darth Rowen was only a few feet away from her as she tried to watch the movie. Now, though, the girl sitting behind her had leaned forward and started asking her a question. Now Kimi loved having fans . . . but it was more annoying than words could describe when they asked for her autograph while she was at the movies.

“Yeah, and I'll sign your forehead or whatever AFTER the movie.” Kimi snapped without looking back at the girl.

“Oh... I don't want your autograph . . . my name is Anemone, and all I want is a favor.” The girl smirked darkly.

Kimi was about to tell this girl to shut up when suddenly she felt something cold and wet hit the back of her head. It was like someone had thrown a snowball at her, except it was like a kind of slime. She spun around and narrowed her eyes, but then she gasped.

The woman behind her had glowing red eyes. “I am Anemone, Student of Pepsi, Master of Pudding . . . and I need your help to destroy the Flan-I.”

Kimi was about to say something when the wet substance that had landed in her hair began to grow. Kimi flew up out of her seat, but faster than even she could move, she felt her body being covered by the odd substance and her movement restricted. When it reached her face she recognized the smell – she was trapped in chocolate pudding!

“... 'scue me...” Rowen leaned over the back of his seat, looking at Anemone. “As much as I hate Kimi – and believe me, I do – I can't let someone ELSE defeat her. I mean, if CHoW kills her that's fine and all . . . but other than him, I called dibbs almost two years ago.”

By now, a giant ball of pudding had landed on the floor, shaking furiously as Kimi tried to escape. Anemone looked at Rowen with a raised eyebrow.

“Who . . . are you?”

Rowen sweat dropped and fell over. “GEEZ! I'm Darth Rowen of the Sith! Number two man for LASOOF, famous traitor of the Flan-I, I've also got ninja powers that --”

“FLAN-I!?” Anemone roared, her eyes blazing. “You . . . You will pay for your misdeeds!” She clapped her hands together and when she took them apart a ball of pudding appeared. She threw it at Rowen's head and though he dodged it, a small bit of flan landed on his bandanna.

“Crazy lady!” Rowen barked. “I'll show you . . . Chidor—Gah!” Rowen was trying to charge his Chidori when the small bit of pudding grew, completely covering him as it had Kimi. The ball of pudding with Rowen inside fell on the ground, next to the ball of pudding that contained Kimi. The first ball was a lot bigger than it had been, that sight caused Anemone to laugh.

“I know all about your appetite, Super Kimi. Eat the pudding all you want – the more you eat, the more it grows! You can't save yourself THAT way.” Anemone growled.

“Damn!” Kimi's muffled voice responded. “Oh well... it still taste pretty good for a ball of evil.”

“You do realize that the pudding is on a movie theater floor?” Anemone asked.

“... Ewwwwwwww!”




“You know what I don't understand?” Sama asked from his seat on the couch. “How did they make all that stuff out of coconuts? I mean, a treadmill out of bamboo and coconuts... it's just not possible!”

On the couch in the Flan-I living room was a very bored looking HA (not that you could tell, what with the hood and all), Crystal Rose and Sama. The television in front of them was on TV Land and it was replying an old episode of Finnegan's Peninsula – a show about shipwreck survivors on a peninsula trying to escape and not realizing that it was a peninsula and not an island.

“You know what I don't understand? Why we EVER give Sama the remote control!” HA growled, clearly annoyed.

“Aww, you're just mad because I made you lock up your leech.” Crystal patted HA on the head sympathetically.

“That leech has a name – and her name is Shannon! And I don't see WHY she has to be locked up. She never hurt anyone!” HA crossed his arms.

“She tried to kill me.” Sama reminded him.

“Oh . . . well, yeah . . . but . . . man I hate the rules around here. We need a good war . . . then I'd be in charge . . . and then we'd have some serious changes!” HA wrung his hands evily.

“Too bad it's not a war and I'm still the boss.” Crystal grinned to herself. Then she smirked. “Buuut . . . if you feel bad . . . I know what always cheers people up!”

HA narrowed his eyes dangerously. “Don't even consider it!”

“HUGGLES!” The girl instantly hugged HA, which caused him to scream and try to escape. Sama shook his head. Things at the Flan-I Temple were as weird as ever. Though living here he didn't have to cook as much, so it was actually pretty nice.

At that moment, the television set switched on. Spoony's face appeared and he looked gravely serious. Sama sighed, his show having been interrupted. Crystal noticed the serious look on his face and released HA (much to HA's relief).

“I have some grim news...” The Spoon said quietly. “I just got a report from someone who was at the movie theater Kimi went to, apparently both Kimi and Rowen were covered in pudding and abducted by a unknown girl.”

“What!?” Sama nearly fell off the couch.
“Huh!?” Crystal's eyes were as wide as baseballs.
“Pudding?” HA seemed to dislike the sound of that.

“Yeah . . . but not just that . . . I'm afraid we got a call from Mustang over at the Military Base. Their security cameras caught a surprising scene. Tazzy broke into the Military Archives and was attacked . . . by CHoW!”

“TAZZY!?” Crystal yelped, instantly afraid for her best friend.
“CHOW!?” Sama was shocked to learn CHoW was back in town.
“Pudding...” HA was still thinking about the pudding.

“Don't worry, Tazzy's perfectly fine.” Spoony reassured the frightened Flan-I Master in pink. Crystal sighed, reassured. “Phazon's student TS saved her.”

“Phazon saved her!?” Both Sama and Crystal cried out at once. Yes, they had been told of his alleged 'side switching', but they never expected him to do something like this.
“Pudding...” The pudding thing was still most intriguing to HA.

“Listen to me:” Spoony said in a authoritative voice. “Saving Kimi and Rowen has to be our first priority. Tazzy is safe with Phazon and TS. Take that new girl with you.”

“Ah, I haven't had a chance to train her yet...” Sama recalled with a sweat drop.

“Bah... well, then she'd better stay behind. You three get moving and help Kimi and Rowen!” Spoony commanded.

“Sama should stay and train the new kid.” HA decided.

“What? No! I gotta help Kimi!” Sama shook his head quickly.

“I'll stay with Koa.” Crystal nodded. “I want to wait for Tazzy to get back anyway . . .”

“NO.” HA said in his own authoritative voice. “She's Sama's student, he has to stay and watch her. You and I are MORE than enough to deal with whoever kidnapped Kimi.”

Sama paused for a minute. “F-Fine . . . I'll stay . . . but you HAVE to help Kimi-chan! Oh, and Rowen too, I guess.”

“Okies . . . but you HAVE to make sure Tazzy is alright!” Crystal insisted.

“Yeah, I'll do that.” Sama nodded in response.

“If you're all done... GET GOING!” Spoony sighed. It seemed like everyone always had to delay whenever he gave them orders. Alas, being in charge was tough work.




“Where the heck are we?” Kimi asked as she looked around the cage she and Rowen were seated in.

“In a cave. Duh.” Rowen replied.

The two were trapped in a big cave that was located in some underground cavern. The cage was made of bars, but there was a strange orange energy floating around the outside of the cave. Rowen had his arms crossed and was sitting in the corner. Kimi stood in the middle of the cage and looked annoyed.

“I KNOW we're in a cave! I mean where at!” Kimi yelled back.

“Do I look psychic to you?” Rowen quirked an eyebrow.

“No, you just look stupid.” Kimi responded at once.

Rowen stood up. “You're... annoying.” He said in a Sasuke-esque way.

“YOU'RE the guy who always causes evil stuff that means I gotta leave my house. I like my house. It's where I sleep.” Kimi nodded.

“Hmm... well, Miss. Goldfish Memory, your house... BURNT DOWN.” Rowen yelled.

Kimi began to shake. She slammed her foot on the ground and then swiped it across, making a line in the rock beneath them. “THAT'S IT! You shut up and stay on your half of the cage! If you come on my half, I'm going to pound your head into a rock!”

Rowen blinked. “That's not half... I have like, a sliver!”

Kimi looked around. It was true, she had at least four-fifths of the cave to herself . . . but she didn't really care. “Just stay on your side of the line or you're getting hurt.”

Rowen shook his head. “I'm not afraid of you . . . I need to defeat you anyway!” He reached down and grabbed his flansaber, turning on both blades.

Kimi's response was a yawn. “I eat flansabers, remember? And you call me forgetful...” A smirk crossed Kimi's lips. “Then again, I did forget to call you Coojie.”

Rowen's eye twitched. “That . . . that does it! I'm taking you out, once and for all!” Rowen charged forward, slashing his saber in a wild frenzy. Kimi dodged the blades with her super speed and got behind Rowen, kicking him in the head and knocking him down. Rowen used his Chaos Control to teleport from the ground and reappear behind Kimi. He punched her in the back quickly, and before she could retaliate with a kick to the face, both teens were hurled to either side of the cage.

“Stop.” Anemone had walked into the room. “I need the two of you alive . . .”

Anemone's eyes flashed again and the rock floor of the cage rose up, forming a wall between Kimi and Rowen.

“That should keep you two from hurting one another.” Anemone decided. “Now sit still . . . it's almost time for the Flan-I to come help . . . then we will be closer to our revenge.”

“Who are you?” Kimi demanded. “One of the Custard freaks?”

“No . . . Custard must die as well . . .” Anemone said darkly. “I am . . . Anemone . . . Pudding-I Knight.”




“Master Sama . . .?” Koa was standing in the middle of the holographic projection room in the Flan-I Temple. “What are we doing?”

Sama was also in the room. “This is the biggest empty space we have... we won't be using HA's holographic battle chamber, but we DO need a safe place for me to teach you The Flan.” Sama announced.

“Oh... okay.” Koa smiled. “I really want to learn The Flan.”

Sama rubbed his neck. “Heh, well . . . I'm new at this teacher thing... my teacher made me fight some Ants in Pants while she got Chinese Food . . . but we don't have time for all of that fancy stuff, so we'll have to go with some basic and easy stuff.”

Sama had already given Koa a Flansaber – a blue one. “I'll teach you some sword stuff.”

Koa seemed a bit annoyed by that. “Oh . . . uh . . . can we learn actual stuff involving The Flan instead?”

Sama shook his head. “Not till you're a great swordsman . . . er, woman. Whatever. Point is, you gotta be able to use a sword.”

Nodding, apparently understanding, Koa activated her saber. Sama smiled. “Good! Now . . . try to knock the saber out of my hand. It's okay if you don't get it your first try.”

Sama activated his green saber and waited for Koa's strike. She rushed at him, spinning around at the last moment and using a powerful two-handed strike from the side. Sama blocked it with one arm, not expecting her unique attack and his saber flew from his hand and across the room.

“Wowzers . . .” Sama emulated Inspector Gadget as he watched the blade fly. “That was awesome! I mean, uh, good job.”

“Can we move on to The Flan now?” Koa asked anxiously.

Sama paused. Koa seemed overly-eager to learn the secrets of The Flan. That was great! He wanted his first student to go on to do important things, and if she was this anxious it meant he had good odds of having that happened. Sama rubbed his head.

“Oh . . . alright! I'll teach you the secrets!” Sama announced.

Koa grinned. “That's awesome, Master!”




“This is it.”

Phazon was sitting in the back of TS' car. Rikku was right next to him, with Tazzy and TS in front. The former-arch villain looked on. Tazzy whistled.

They were in the Dessert Desert, and right in front of them was a giant Blue Door. It had a silver trim on the edges. The door had strange writing on the front, which was silver and composed entirely of ancient runes.

“It's pretty amazing, isn't it?” TS acknowledged. “I wonder what's beyond that door . . .”

“They say it's the secrets of Pudding, Custard and Flan.” Phazon informed them. “The teachings that taught Pepper, Pibb and Pepsi are beyond that door . . .”

“And also, whatever turned this beautiful valley into a lifeless desert is back there too.” Rikku reminded them all.

Tazzy shook her head. “So if this door is opened...”

“The whole world could be destroyed.” Phazon nodded.




Anemone was smiling. Kimi saw this and laughed.

“When the Flan-I get here they'll either kick your ass OR at least get me out of this cage, and then I will!” Kimi crossed her arms in defiance.

“The Flan-I . . . will die.” Anemone responded. “As we speak, the secrets of the Flan are being learned . . .” Anemone waved her arm and a portal opened, allowing Kimi and Rowen to watch a scene through it.

“Is that . . . Sama?” Kimi blinked.

“The Flan-I have been tricked . . .” Anemone's smile grew. “The girl who is learning their secrets . . . is my Sister-in-Pudding.”








Dum Dum Dum! :D

More soon! Yes, yes, yes!

Kimiko - June 1, 2007 04:56 AM (GMT)
XD PUDDING!

Aside from all the AWESOMENESS involved in this installment, I must think...

It seems all the members of the Pudding-I are female, as Pepsi was female... but Custard-I and Flan-I allows both genders (though don't exactly recall any females in the Custard-I, so this could be incorrect)... so... if Anemone didn't seem so intent on killing the Flan-I... I WOULD predict that she would try to convery Tazzy and Crystal Rose to the Pudding... hm...

Anyway! AWESOME!!!!!

AGodofIrony - June 1, 2007 05:00 AM (GMT)
Love triangle! I was wondering if something like that would happen with Pepper/Pibb/Pepsi...Hmmm...But when shall we reveal the other thing with Pepper and Pibb GS?

Anyways, awesome! I need to get writing so it can be combined at the end!

And Kimi! Pibb taught anyone who wanted to learn Custard...Just not that many Custard-Is left!

GoldenSama - June 1, 2007 05:00 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (Kimiko @ Jun 1 2007, 12:56 AM)
XD PUDDING!

Aside from all the AWESOMENESS involved in this installment, I must think...

It seems all the members of the Pudding-I are female, as Pepsi was female... but Custard-I and Flan-I allows both genders (though don't exactly recall any females in the Custard-I, so this could be incorrect)... so... if Anemone didn't seem so intent on killing the Flan-I... I WOULD predict that she would try to convery Tazzy and Crystal Rose to the Pudding... hm...

Anyway! AWESOME!!!!!

I'm glad you liked it Kimi. ^_^

You are also very detective-like! Yes, all the Pudding-I are female... is there a reason for this, or is it mere coincidence? I don't know. Which is what I say when I really mean "I do know but I'm not telling". XD

It's possible there were female Custard-I's before Pepper had them all killed... you'd have to ask AGOI about that. :p

EDIT: AGOI also posted! Heh, cool! Glad you liked it Mr. Professor!

Everything will be revealed in time... but yes, Pibb/Pepper/Pepsi had a love triangle thang. We'll get to that later when I PM you.

But for now I need to watch TV. Thanks for reading!

tailsonic15 - June 1, 2007 06:18 AM (GMT)
Heh, all of DP's students have had letters for names

Trendy?

1 door can destroy the world...... awesome.

Dark Phazon - June 1, 2007 06:49 AM (GMT)
What a Pepsi Twist!

...

I used to love Pepsi Twist, then Coca Cola came out with Coca Cola with Lime. Then Pepsi discontinued Pepsi Twist. And now it looks like Coca Cola has now discontinued Coca Cola with Lime. And that makes me sad.

...

Oh, the story? Any more comments will have to wait until after I sleep...

I just noticed there's no sleepy smiley...

...

Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

BlueRush - June 1, 2007 07:16 AM (GMT)
OK... So apparently there's a five-part series I never knew about, in which, among other things:

1. Phazon becomes not-evil, which I guess you could call "Tepid"?
2. The K-Tower burns down?? Possibly.
3. Koa is introduced! I will totally not be fooled by her act.
4. Kimi and Sama are attacked by some wierd guy?
5. Pepper... Pibb... riiight... <<; Should I know who they are?
6. Everyone's not in different dimensions anymore. XD

I'd better get reading! ^_^ This installment was great! Good job, GS!

GoldenSama - June 1, 2007 03:13 PM (GMT)
Heh, Pepsi Twist... I liked that stuff... way more than I should have...

Yes Rush! There is a series! I didn't tell you about it? >.> My bad. It's all in the zone if you wanna read it, or I can just tell you what happened, but that's not as much fun.

Thanks for reading, all of you! ^^ Happy to hear it was good.

Dark Phazon - June 1, 2007 03:32 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (BlueRush @ Jun 1 2007, 03:16 AM)
OK... So apparently there's a five-part series I never knew about, in which, among other things:

1. Phazon becomes not-evil, which I guess you could call "Tepid"?
2. The K-Tower burns down?? Possibly.
3. Koa is introduced! I will totally not be fooled by her act.
4. Kimi and Sama are attacked by some wierd guy?
5. Pepper... Pibb... riiight... <<; Should I know who they are?
6. Everyone's not in different dimensions anymore. XD

I'd better get reading! ^_^ This installment was great! Good job, GS!

1.) Tepid's a pretty good mixer from OCR. Otherwise, I don't know what you're talking about. And ya, Darth Phazon is currently without any evil, since circa the first part of this series.

2.) Read the first of this set for the answer

3.) :LOL:

4.) It's been so long, I don't know what you're talking about here... :heh: Isn't that, like, what always happens?

5.) Dr. Pepper = Master Soda (that alternate name idea came from me, cause I always called him Dr. Pepper when I talked about him in my comments XD); Pibb = that guy who almost looks like a non-fat Santa Claus, who has something to do with leading all that Custard stuff similar to the way Soda did Flan (see all the stories AGoI came up with, 'cause AGoI created him in one of them)

6.) See the last two episodes of the 10-or-so part series (the last episode is BRILLIANT)


...............................

I forsee Coca Cola in the future...

Seeing "Anemone" still gets me confused with the Eureka Seven character of the same name. Curse you Master Pogi for picking that name to represent your character!!! XD :p

Pudding snacks trap... reminds me of the lone Ghostwriter episode I remember from the early ninties, where there was a small monster creature made out of bubblegum, who trapped characters in huge wads of gum. It was actually quite a scary episode...

Finnegan's Peninsula FTW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

RIKKU!!!!!!!!!!

Darth Phazon's had the evil drained out of him for maybe a day, and already has a student?? That guy's quick...

And... there's still so much unanswered!! Hopefully the next episode really comes quite a bit sooner than this one did!

*remembers how I thought BR was in the best position, for being able to read the episodes right after each other. And now this has been going for so long, that now he has to wait, too* XD

Excellent Work!!!

GoldenSama - June 1, 2007 03:41 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Dark Phazon @ Jun 1 2007, 11:32 AM)
4.) It's been so long, I don't know what you're talking about here... :heh:


...............................

I forsee Coca Cola in the future...

Seeing "Anemone" still gets me confused with the Eureka Seven character of the same name. Curse you Master Pogi for picking that name to represent your character!!! XD :p

Pudding snacks trap... reminds me of the lone Ghostwriter episode I remember from the early ninties, where there was a small monster creature made out of bubblegum, who trapped characters in huge wads of gum. It was actually quite a scary episode...

Finnegan's Peninsula FTW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

RIKKU!!!!!!!!!!

Darth Phazon's had the evil drained out of him for maybe a day, and already has a student?? That guy's quick...

And... there's still so much unanswered!! Hopefully the next episode really comes quite a bit sooner than this one did!

*remembers how I thought BR was in the best position, for being able to read the episodes right after each other. And now this has been going for so long, that now he has to wait, too* XD

Excellent Work!!!

4.) I think he is refering to the weird guy from the beginning of this arc who had no real name or importance, other than the fact it's the same guy who stole Phazon's evil.

Coca Cola? Hmm... I'll never tell. XD

Never saw Ghostwriter... but that sounds awesome...

XD Somebody got the Finnegan's Peninsula! Yay! I thought that joke would be lost in space...

Plothole... wait, no it's not! Phazon was already training TS prior to his not being evil... or... uh... I'll explain it somehow! Yes, I will!

The next episode... I'm working on it right now (which means nothing, as you well know) and it will explain a lot... but probably not what you want explained. XD You'll see...

Thanks for reading. ^^ I'm glad that you liked it, and THANK YOU for getting the Finnegan's Peninsula reference! :D

Dark Phazon - June 1, 2007 04:01 PM (GMT)
Ghostwriter was a mystery show-thing that aired on PBS way back when I was a little kid (part of their block of interesting educational-ish shows like Bill Nye the Science Guy, Where in the World is Carmen Sandiego, and I think one other show I'm drawing a blank on). And the Bubblegum creature, as well as the one or two episodes that covered the story of what it did, was actually revealed at the end of the episode to be just a story written by one of the characters of the show. I also remember two other things about it: Vinegar helps dissolve bubble gum, and that when it used the gum to trap some of the kids, it scared the crap out of me. :LOL:

I hope the next episode will explain at least one thing I want explained, or else I'm still going to be stuck in a state of limbo...

I once knew a kid who was a Finnegan... His parents owned a business that dealt with funeral services, and they were quite rich (at least enough that they had a big huge pool in the backyard). They didn't have their own peninsula, though.

GoldenSama - June 1, 2007 04:25 PM (GMT)
I used to like PBS... Bill Nye is awesome. Like a possum. Yeeeah. Ghostwriter sounds awesome, I have to go Wiki it...

What is that one thing? If it's what I suspect it is (and it probably is) then yes, that will be explained... and you'd never believe the shocking twist! XD

I've never met anyone named Finnegan. :p

Cojo - June 1, 2007 10:40 PM (GMT)
W00tness!

I am loving this series! This was so awesome, that I took it to school to re-read. I can't wait for the next part to the story.

Oh Wow Br, you are behind...

AGodofIrony - June 2, 2007 12:07 AM (GMT)
I remember Ghostwriter's DP!

And yah, Pibb was introduced in 'Teh Adventures of...Super Jimi and Wonder Hammah?!', which was a spin-off.

Pibb is to Custard what Pepper is to Flan!

And GS...I gotta PM you, because I just realized something!

Crystal Rose - June 2, 2007 01:49 AM (GMT)
Gah! See what camp does to me! I totally miss reading this awesome chapter alllllllllllllllllllll day!!!!!


First off, the Pudding-I is freakin awesome, Love triangles, awesome new characters, and totally evil plots make my day!!! Anemone is great!!

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Finnegan's Peninsula – a show about shipwreck survivors on a peninsula trying to escape and not realizing that it was a peninsula and not an island.


XD

I can't wait for the next chapter! This is amazing!!!!

GoldenSama - June 2, 2007 01:52 AM (GMT)
Cojo - Heh, I'm glad you liked it! ^^ Awesome! The next part will be really good, but might take a bit. :D I'm glad you enjoyed it.

AGOI - Heheheh... PM is a yes. That'll be awesome. I bet everyone else wished they knew what was going on. They will, soon. :3

C_R-chan - Aww, no worries! The chapters are here when you get home. ^^ I'm glad you liked it, and since you got the Finnegan's Peninsula reference you WIN! Heh... I like the Pudding stuff too, and the love triangles... those are fun to write. Thanks for reading!

As I said to Cojo... the next chapter will be a ways off... but there's a reason for that... it's going to be fantastic! :D Just wait, you'll love it!

Tazzy Porqupine - June 2, 2007 02:01 AM (GMT)
Oh noes! Sama is being tricked! Kimi and Rowen are trapped in a giant cage together! And the evil Pudding-I are out to kill the Flan- and Custard-I! Whatever will we doooo? :o

Hmmm.... who are these Pudding-I??? What we know about them so far: The original Pudding-I was stuck in a love triangle with the Flan- and Custard-I, the Pudding-I hate the Flan- and Custard-I, and everyone in the Pudding-I is female. So, that could only mean.... that he Pudding-I is.... some sort of men-hating feminist group? :blink:

XD Oops. Sorry if I offended anyone there... but I was just playing. :p Anemone hated Kimi too, remember? *GASP* Then that means that the Pudding-I are members of a people-hating alien group!!!!! I'm so smart. :p

GoldenSama - June 2, 2007 02:07 AM (GMT)
XD Tazzy your review made me laugh. That's awesome!

All the information about the Pudding-I will be revealed eventually, that is a promise! :3

I'm glad you liked it! ^^ Hopefully the next one will be done soon. You'll see how much you got correct (if anything).




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