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Clown Prince of Crime - July 18, 2007 05:59 AM (GMT)
All this "future character" business made me remember an oooooooooold something-or-other I wrote. I was going to make my own Digimon series that takes place in the future of the "Adventure" continuity (known in America as Digimon seasons 1 and 2). This means... future child OCs! I may draw the OC characters in this for that contest if I feel like it later. At any rate, I wrote this sometime before 2004... dunno how long before then, but I definitely know that it was before 2004. This was, like I said, to be a series, though the only thing I had written down was the very first episode. I was going to try and make it into a Flash series, but I quickly gave up after I realized how hard it is to make things in Flash. :heh: Anywho, due to how I had originally planned this series to be... it's written in script format. If you guys like this story, I may someday pick it back up and rewrite this first episode into story format... or better yet, I can just turn it into a comic (ya, right... but a man can dream, no?). I hope you guys read this, though, as I really would like some feedback! Anywho... that's enough of my overly long explanation! So, without further ado... on with the show!


Digimon Extreme
Episode 1
"Jijimon's plea! Max becomes a Destiny Tamer."


FADE IN:

INT. YAGAMI RESIDENCE, MAX'S BEDROOM -MORNING


MAX SLOWLY SITS UP WHILE AWAKENING AND YAWNS AND STRETCHES
WHILE DOING SO. HE RUBS HIS EYES AND THEN LOOKS OVER TO THE
GROUND ON THE SIDE OF HIS BED TO SEE AGUMON B IN A KNAPSACK,
SLEEPING SOUNDLY. MAX SMILES AND GETS OUT OF BED AND BEGINS
TO GET DRESSED (PREVIOUSLY HE WAS IN PAJAMAS).

MAX (V.O.)

Hi. I'm Max. I'm a typical 7th grader.

My life is quite typical in every way.

I also have my own Digimon, who is

also very typical. I call him Botamon,

though he hasn't been a Botamon since,

well, quite a long time ago.

CUT TO:

INT. YAGAMI RESIDENCE, MAX'S BATHROOM -CONTINUOUS


MAX IS IN THE BATHROOM COMBING HIS HAIR AND BRUSHING HIS
TEETH.

MAX (V.O.)

Having a Digimon is pretty cool. Not

everyone has a Digimon, but most

people do. A lot of people think of it

as like having a pet, but it's more

than that. Digimon may not be human,

but they can be just as smart as one.

Unlike a pet, you can't just go to a

store and buy a Digimon, though. It's

kinda hard to explain.

CUT TO:

INT. YAGAMI RESIDENCE, MAX'S BEDROOM -CONTINUOUS


MAX (V.O.)

If you're supposed to end up having a

Digimon, somehow, someway, you end up

having a Digimon.

MAX WAKES UP AGUMON B AND IT LOOKS LIKE THEY'RE EXCHANGING
SOME DIALOGUE, HOWEVER WE DON'T GET TO HEAR WHAT THEY'RE
SAYING.

CUT TO:

INT. YAGAMI RESIDENCE, HALLWAY -CONTINUOUS


MAX AND AGUMON B RUN DOWNSTAIRS AND ARE ABOUT TO HEAD TOWARDS
THE DOOR.

RYOKO (O.S.)

Max? Are you leaving right now, honey?

MAX

Ya, mom. I'm going with Botamon to the

arcade!

RYOKO (O.S.)

Without eating any breakfast? Come on

in here, I don't want all this food to

go to waste!

MAX

Oh, alright, mom, I'm coming.

CUT TO:

INT. YAGAMI RESIDENCE, KITCHEN -CONTINUOUS


MAX AND AGUMON B SIT DOWN AT THE TABLE WHILE RYOKO SERVES
THEM IN THE PLATES THAT ARE LAID BEFORE THEM.

MAX (V.O.)

That's my mom. She's a pretty typical

mom. I love her very much, but

sometimes... well, like I said, she's

a typical mom.

AGUMON B

Thank you for the delicious food, Mrs.

Yagami!

RYOKO

Oh, it's no trouble at all, Botamon.

Now where are Taichi and Agumon?

Haven't they gotten ready yet? If they

don't hurry up and eat breakfast,

they'll be late for work!

MAX

Oh, you know how dad and Agumon are,

mom. Don't worry, they won't be late.

TAICHI AND AGUMON A ENTER THE KITCHEN. AGUMON A SITS DOWN AT
THE TABLE WHILE TAICHI, DRESSED UP IN A SUIT AND TIE AND
HOLDING A BRIEFCASE, KISSES RYOKO.

TAICHI

Sorry about the wait, honey.

RYOKO

Oh, it's okay, dear, but you better

hurry up and eat breakfast so you can

make it to work on time.

AGUMON A

Mmmm. This smells good. Time to dig

in!

TAICHI

Agumon, you'll eat anything.

RYOKO

What's that supposed to mean?

TAICHI

Oh, nothing, dear! I, heh, simply mean

that... ummm... mmmm, this smells

good. Time to dig in!

EVERYONE IS SITTING AT THE TABLE EATING THEIR FOOD.

MAX (V.O.)

My dad seems to always try my mom's

patience, but it's easy to see that

they do love each other. And Agumon's

a bit of a dork. There's just some

sort of weird energy about him. It's

hard for me to believe that him and my

dad saved the world several times when

my dad was about my age.

I've heard the stories several times,

but usually when you think of heroes,

you think of someone with superpowers

or something. Well, I guess you could

say that my dad's not typical. Hey,

what do ya know? Something about my

family that isn't typical! Well, I

mean, he's an ambassador that handles

relations between the digital world

and the human world. That's not a

typical job. He gets paid a crudload

of money. Seriously, my parents are

totally rich! But if you saw our

house, inside or out, you'd probably

guess that we're higher middle class.

Plus, he doesn't have to work

everyday, just when his services are

needed. Today he received a call to

come into the building because of some

glitch with in the digital world.

TAICHI'S CELL-PHONE STARTS TO RING. TAICHI TAKES IT OUT OF
HIS VEST POCKET AND ANSWERS IT.

TAICHI

Hello?

KOUSHIRO (O.S.)

Taichi! We need you to come over here

right away!

The situation's even worse than we

first thought! I'll explain when you

get here, but hurry, this is an

emergency!

TAICHI

Okay, don't worry I'll be right over!

Bye!

TAICHI HANGS UP THE PHONE AND IMMEDIATELY GETS UP FROM THE
TABLE, HAVING A CONCERNED LOOK ON HIS FACE.

AGUMON A

What's wrong, Taichi?

TAICHI

We have to go right now, Agumon! You

can bring the food with you, but

Koushiro and Tentomon need our help!

AGUMON A

Okay, Taichi! I'm right behind you!

RYOKO

So you're not going to finish

breakfast, dear?

TAICHI

I can't, Ryoko. Koushiro said that

this was a big emergency! Don't worry,

though, I'll try to straighten

everything out soon so that I can be

home in time for dinner! Bye, dear!

TAICHI AND AGUMON A RUN OUT THE DOOR VERY FAST. WE HEAR THE
CAR START AND DRIVE OFF.

RYOKO

(sighs) I guess I'll be alone around

the house, today. With your father at

work and you at the arcade.

MAX BEGINS TO GET A LOOK ON HIS FACE INDICATING THAT HE FEELS
SORRY FOR RYOKO.

MAX

Mom... I... I haven't gone out in a

while. I mean, I've really been

looking forward to going to the arcade

today. There's some new machines they

put in, and--

RYOKO INTERRUPTS MAX MID-SENTENCE.

RYOKO

It's okay, Max. Don't worry about it.

You go on and do what you wanna do.

I'll be fine.

MAX HAS A LOOK ON HIS FACE OF BITTER-SWEETNESS. AGUMON B JUST
LOOKS AT ONE AND THE OTHER, WITH A LOOK ON HIS FACE THAT
SHOWS US THAT HE WANTS TO SAY SOMETHING BUT ISN'T QUITE SURE
WHAT THAT SOMETHING IS. THE 3 OF THEM CONTINUE EATING
BREAKFAST.

DISSOLVE TO:

EXT. TANAKACORP INC. BUILDING -MOMENTS LATER


TAICHI AND AGUMON A GET OUT OF THE CAR AND START HEADING
TOWARDS THE BUILDING.

AGUMON A

So you think that after all this time,

there might be a new threat?

But it's been so many years since

we've last had one.

TAICHI

Just because it's been a little over

30 years since we've had a threat

doesn't mean that it'll never happen

again. I've got a funny feeling,

Agumon. Koushiro wouldn't have sounded

so troubled if this wasn't serious.

CUT TO:

INT. TANAKACORP INC. BUILDING -CONTINUOUS


THE 2 CONTINUE WALKING WHILE INSIDE THE BUILDING AND START
HEADING TOWARDS AN ELEVATOR.

TAICHI

I've known Koushiro long enough to

know that whenever he acts like this,

something big is about to go down. We

have to try and nip it in the bud

before it becomes a problem, whatever

it may be.

TAICHI AND AGUMON A WALK INSIDE THE ELEVATOR. TAICHI PUSHES 2
AND 5 SO THAT THE ELEVATOR WILL TAKE THEM TO THE 25TH FLOOR.

TAICHI (CONT'D)

I know you haven't had to fight in a

long time, Agumon. Maybe you may have

gotten rusty.

AGUMON A

Hey, wait a minute, Taichi!

TAICHI

Sorry, buddy. I didn't mean to offend,

but it's been a long time since you've

had to fight. If this new threat turns

out to be really powerful, it'd be

better to try and thwart it before

fighting becomes an option. Because

even if you can fight, it usually ends

up causing lots of destruction. Both

in the digital world and this one.

AGUMON A

Well, whatever the big emergency is,

we're about to find out about it now,

Taichi!

THE ELEVATOR STOPS AND THE 2 OF THEM WALK OUT OF IT, NOW
ENTERING A LARGE ROOM WHERE SEVERAL PEOPLE ARE WORKING ON
COMPUTERS AND SUCH. THIS ROOM RESEMBLES SOMETHING OF A
PENTAGON COMPUTER WAR ROOM IN SEVERAL WAYS.

TANAKACORP EMPLOYEE

Oh, Mr. Yagami! I'm so glad that you

could make it! I take it you received

Mr. Izumi's call, right?

TAICHI

Yes, I came as fast as I could. Where

is Koushiro, anyway?

TANAKACORP EMPLOYEE

Well, sir, that's just the thing. You

see, Mr. Izumi is stuck in the digital

world.

TAICHI

What do you mean he's... stuck?

TANAKACORP EMPLOYEE

Well, sir, perhaps you should observe

the screen.

TAICHI AND AGUMON A LOOK AT A HUMONGOUS SCREEN ON THE BACK
END WALL OF THE ROOM. IT TURNS ON AND WE SEE KOUSHIRO AND
TENTOMON ON THE SCREEN.

TAICHI

Koushiro!

KOUSHIRO

Taichi! I'm so glad you've come! But

I'm starting to wonder if there's

anything you can do.

TAICHI

Koushiro, what happened? What's the

matter? How'd you get stuck in the

digital world?

KOUSHIRO

I'm not exactly sure what's going on.

If I had to take a guess, and this is

mostly pure conjecture, I'd say that a

virus has corrupted and taken over the

digital world.

It's as if the digital world has a

mind of its own now! Several digimon

can freely come and go to and from the

digital world, but all the humans--

TENTOMON INTERRUPTS KOUSHIRO MID-SENTENCE.

TENTOMON

And any digimon partners of said

humans.

KOUSHIRO

Yes, thank you, Tentomon. Any humans

and their digimon, if applicable,

cannot travel back to the human world.

TAICHI

Agumon and I can come in there and get

you out!

KOUSHIRO

It's not that simple, Taichi! Nobody

can get in, either! And this has

become a major problem, since there's

millions of people that won't be able

to get back to their friends and

families! This problem will--

TENTOMON INTERRUPTS KOUSHIRO MID-SENTENCE.

TENTOMON

Oh, no! Koushiro, look!

KOUSHIRO AND TENTOMON ARE NOW LOOKING TO THE RIGHT SIDE, BUT
WE CAN'T SEE WHAT THEY SEE.

KOUSHIRO

What in the world?! NO!! Tentomon, you

better evolve before--

THE SCREEN TURNS TO STATIC. A TANAKACORP EMPLOYEE SHUTS OFF
THE MONITOR.

TAICHI

Agumon, I'm afraid that we can't nip

this in the bud, afterall.

AGUMON A

Not only that, but I don't think we

can do anything, anyway.

TAICHI

As much as I hate to admit it,

buddy... I'm afraid you may be right.

DISSOLVE TO:

INT. ODAIBA MALL ARCADE -LATER


AGUMON B

So, Max, what do you want to play now?

MAX

Hmmm. How about that one?

MAX SEES AN ARCADE GAME LABELED "DESTINY" AND POINTS AT IT.

MAX (CONT'D)

I've never even heard of that game.

Let's check it out, Botamon.

THE 2 OF THEM BEGIN TO WALK TOWARDS THE ARCADE MACHINE.

AGUMON B

Max... I got a funny feeling.

MAX

Of a video game?!

AGUMON B

I don't know... I just got this

feeling all of a sudden.

MAX

Maybe the funny feeling is that I need

you to spot me a token. I'm, heh, all

out.

AGUMON B MAKES AN ANNOYED FACE.

AGUMON B

How can you be out already?

MAX

Well, some of those really good games

are more expensive.

AGUMON B

Well, I can't spot you, I'm all out,

too.

MAX

Geez, Botamon, you're such a hypocrite

Why didn't you just say you didn't

have any tokens?

AGUMON B

Well, I guess we won't be able to

check that game out, then.

MAX LOOKS AT THE FLOOR AND FINDS A TOKEN.

MAX

What's this? Looks like we're in luck!

Ha! I don't know why you had such a

funny feeling, Botamon. If you ask me,

I'd say this is our lucky day!

MAX PUTS THE TOKEN INTO THE MACHINE, BUT THEN THE MACHINE
STARTS GLOWING, AND THE WHOLE ROOM STARTS TO LIGHT UP.
SUDDENLY MAX AND AGUMON B APPEAR TO BE SOMEWHERE ELSE. A
PLACE THAT'S COMPLETELY WHITE AND VOID OF ANYTHING ELSE
BESIDES MAX, AGUMON B, AND JIJIMON.

AGUMON B

I told you I had a funny feeling, Max!

MAX

Just what's going on here?

JIJIMON

Just as the game said... Max, this is

your destiny!

MAX

To meet a hairy old man with a paw on

his cane while in a white room?

AGUMON B

Max, I can feel something... this is a

Digimon!

JIJIMON

He's right. I am indeed a Digimon. An

elder of the Digital World, and I

sense a great peril fast approaching.

I'm lucky that I was able to reach

you.

You will need to travel to the Digital

World and help vanquish evil. However,

I won't be able to transport you here

without more power.

MAX

You want ME to help the Digital World?

Wow. Does this mean I'm a chosen

child?

JIJIMON

Yes, but more than even that. You are

to be a Destiny Tamer!

MAX

What's... a Destiny Tamer?

JIJIMON

You'll know soon enough... when the

time is right.

MAX

Alright. But, what do I do to give you

more power?

JIJIMON

It's quite simple, actually. Just find

at least 2 more Destiny Tamers. Then

you'll have to come back to this very

spot and hold your digivices up to

this very same machine you inserted a

token into.

MAX

But I don't have a digivice! And how

will I find--

JIJIMON INTERRUPTS MAX.

JIJIMON

You'll find the others with this

digivice that I shall give you.

JIJIMON EXTENDS HIS STAFF AND A D-3 DIGIVICE APPEARS IN MAX'S
HAND.

JIJIMON (CONT'D)

You will be able to easily track down

other Destiny Tamers with this.

MAX STARES AT THE DIGIVICE IN HIS HAND FOR ABOUT 5 SECONDS.

JIJIMON (CONT'D)

Do you think you'll be able to handle

this task, Max?

MAX

Yes. You can count on me-- umm, I

don't think I got your name.

JIJIMON
(Voice fading out)

My name is Jijimon. Now you must

hurry! Find 2 more Destiny Tamers!

I'm... counting... you... ka... er...

ah.....

THE ROOM RETURNS TO NORMAL, ALL THE NOISE TYPICALLY
ASSOCIATED WITH ARCADES RETURNS, AND ALL THE OTHER PEOPLE IN
THE ARCADE ACT AS IF NOTHING HAD TRANSPIRED. MAX HAS A
BEWILDERED LOOK ON HIS FACE.
AGUMON B LOOKS UP AT MAX WITH A MELANCHOLY LOOK ON HIS FACE.
MAX LOOKS DOWN AT AGUMON B AND HALF GRINS.

MAX

Shall we go?

AGUMON B'S EYES CLOSE AND HE GIVES MAX A BIG SMILE.

AGUMON B

Of course!

DISSOLVE TO:

EXT. SOMEWHERE IN THE DIGITAL WORLD -LATER


WE SEE TENTOMON ARGUING WITH AKUMAMON, WHO IS FLOATING ABOUT
A FOOT ABOVE THE GROUND IN A POSE THAT SHOWS US HE'S DEEP IN
THOUGHT.

TENTOMON

But why are you doing this? Have you

gone completely crazy? And why do you

keep referring to yourself in--

AKUMAMON INTERRUPTS TENTOMON.

AKUMAMON

I sure wish you'd be quiet, you

worthless insect!

WE SEE THE DIGIMON ANALYZER SCREEN COME UP WITH AKUMAMON'S
STATS. WHICH SHOW US THE FOLLOWING INFORMATION: AKUMAMON;
LEVEL: ???; TYPE: ???; HP: ???

AKUMAMON (CONT'D)

If you're not going to help me, that's

no big loss. Though I'm certain that

for Koushiro's sake, you'll do as I

say.

TENTOMON SHOWS US THAT HE KNOWS HE HAS NO CHOICE THROUGH A
POSE AND A FACIAL EXPRESSION.

AKUMAMON (CONT'D)

As I thought. Now I call forth

Ginryuwamon! Go forth and show the

humans that Digimon are more than

just... pets!

DISSOLVE TO:

EXT. NERIMA DISTRICT -AFTERNOON


MAX

Man, it's hot. I'm getting tired,

Botamon. But at least the digivice

says we're close to a Destiny Tamer.

So we can't give up just yet.

AGUMON B

I'm not tired at all, Max. I can keep

going for days!

MAX

Well, thanks for sharing. Hmmm. Now

let's see here. Hey! What luck, we'll

be able to catch some shade. The

signal is really strong inside of the

Nerima Department Store!

AGUMON B

What are we waiting for? Let's go!

CUT TO:

INT. NERIMA DEPARTMENT STORE -CONTINUOUS


MAX

This is great, Botamon, we're so

close! Any minute now we should be

seeing that Destiny Tamer!

SUDDENLY A LOUD CRASH IS HEARD WHILE LOTS OF SMOKE AND DEBRIS
FILL THE AIR. WE SEE GINRYUWAMON TEARING UP A LOT OF
PROPERTY.

AGUMON B

A Digimon! But why is he causing all

this destruction?

MAX

Maybe he's part of the threat Jijimon

was talking about! We'll have to stop

him as quickly as possible or we might

lose our Destiny Tamer!

AGUMON B

So I'll have to fight him?

MAX

Hey, ya! This is so cool, I've never

been in a Digimon battle before! This

is the most awesome thing ever!

A GIANT SWEAT DROP APPEARS ON AGUMON B'S HEAD.

AGUMON B

Ummm, Max, I'm the one that's in the

battle. Besides, doesn't he look a

little strong to you?

MAX

Hey, some info is popping up on my

digivice.

WE SEE THE DIGIMON ANALYZER SCREEN COME UP WITH GINRYUWAMON'S
STATS. WHICH SHOW US THE FOLLOWING INFORMATION: GINRYUWAMON;
LEVEL: 4; TYPE: VACCINE; HP: 910

MAX (CONT'D)

Hey, wow, no wonder you think he's

strong. He's a whole level above you!

But why would he be doing this? It

says here he's a vaccine! Aren't

vaccine Digimon supposed to be good?

AGUMON B

I was thinking the same thing.

MAX

Well, we need to stop him, regardless!

AGUMON B

But how? He's stronger than me!

MAX

I remember my dad saying that if

someone has a digivice, he'll be able

to share his energy with his digimon,

allowing the digimon to evolve to a

higher level for as long as the

combined energy will allow. I just

wish I knew how to do that.

GINRYUWAMON GETS CLOSER AND CLOSER TO MAX AND AGUMON B.

GINRYUWAMON

You! You are enslaving this digimon do

your dirty work for you! You will be

the first to go!

GINRYUWAMON IS ABOUT TO SWIPE AT MAX, WHEN AGUMON B GETS IN
FRONT OF MAX. THIS CAUSES GINRYUWAMON TO HESITATE.

AGUMON B

I won't let you hurt Max!

GINRYUWAMON

Brother? Why do you protect this

human?

AGUMON B

What do you mean brother?

GINRYUWAMON

You're a fellow Digimon, are you not?

AGUMON B

I'm a Digimon, alright, but this

human's my friend.

GINRYUWAMON

How could you think that? Hmph! You

are a traitor to your kind! You shall

perish along with your "friend"!

GINRYUWAMON ADVANCES AND IS ABOUT TO SWIPE AGUMON B.

MAX

BOTAMON!! No! Stop!!

MAX'S DIGIVICE GLOWS AND SHOOTS LIGHT IN ALL DIRECTIONS.
AGUMON B BEGINS TO EVOLVE.

AGUMON B

Agumon! Evolution!

SPECIAL EFFECTS ENSUE AS AGUMON B BECOMES GREYMON BLUE.

GREYMON BLUE

Greymon!!

MAX

Botamon! You evolved!

GREYMON BLUE

Stand back, Max! Let me handle this

jerk!

GINRYUWAMON

You intend to fight me? So be it!

GREYMON BLUE AND GINRYUWAMON CHARGE EACH OTHER. THEIR HANDS
LOCK ON AS THEY TRY TO PUSH EACH OTHER TO OPPOSITE SIDES.
THEIR FOREHEADS TOUCH AND THEY BEGIN TO STARE EACH OTHER
DOWN. MAX LOOKS DOWN AT HIS DIGIVICE.

MAX

Botamon, you're stronger than him!

Store up all of our combined energy

into one attack and let him have it!

GREYMON BLUE

Got it!

GREYMON BLUE USES THE HORN ON HIS NOSE TO HIT GINRYUWAMON IN
THE CHIN. GINRYUWAMON GROANS AND LETS GO OF HIS GRIP ON
GREYMON BLUE'S HANDS. GREYMON USES HIS TAIL TO WHACK
GINRYUWAMON INTO THE AIR. GREYMON BLUE BEGINS TO GLOW
BRIGHTLY AS SPITS OUT A GIANT FIREBALL AIMED AT THE AIRBORNE
GINRYUWAMON.

GREYMON BLUE (CONT'D)

MEGA FLAME!!

JUST AS GREYMON BLUE'S ATTACK HITS GINRYUWAMON, TIME SEEMS TO
STOP FOR MAX, AND HIS DIGIVICE BEGINS TO GLOW.

MAX

What the heck?

MAX TAKES HIS DIGIVICE, AND LOOKS A BIT PUZZLED. THEN,
SEEMING A BIT UNSURE OF HIMSELF, AIMS HIS DIGIVICE AT
GINRYUWAMON. SUDDENLY TIME REVERTS BACK INTO MOTION, AND A
BEAM FROM MAX'S DIGIVICE HITS GINRYUWAMON AT THE SAME TIME
THAT THE MEGA FLAME ATTACK HITS HIM. GINRYUWAMON THEN TURNS
INTO A COIN AND FALLS TO THE GROUND. GREYMON BLUE GLOWS AND
REVERTS BACK TO AGUMON B. MAX RUNS UP TO AGUMON B AND HOLDS
HIM, AS AGUMON B SEEMS TO BE VERY WEAK.

MAX (CONT'D)

Are you okay, Botamon?

AGUMON B

Max? Remember when I said I could go

on all day? Well, I don't think I can,

anymore.

MAX SMILES AT AGUMON B. THEN HE GETS HIM AND THEY BOTH SLOWLY
WALK OVER TO THE COIN. MAX PICKS IT UP AND LOOKS AT IT WITH A
LOOK THAT SHOWS US THAT HE'S NOT SURE WHAT TO MAKE OF IT. HE
POCKETS IT AND THEN TAKES OUT HIS DIGIVICE.

MAX

Botamon! The digivice says that the

Destiny Tamer is right in front of us!

AGUMON B

Really?

AGUMON B AND MAX LOOK AHEAD AND SEE YUNA HIDING UNDER A
WOODEN BENCH.

MAX

Hi... I'm Max. I'm... supposed to find

you. Heh.

YUNA

I'm... Yuna.

YUNA BEGINS TO GET UP FROM UNDER THE BENCH.

MAX

You're, ummm, something called a

Destiny Tamer. You're going to help

save the world! Isn't that cool?

YUNA

A Destiny Tamer? How can I be a tamer

without a Digimon?

A D-3 DIGIVICE APPEARS IN YUNA'S LEFT HAND AND A DIGIEGG
APPEARS IN HER RIGHT HAND.

YUNA (CONT'D)

Oh... I guess I do have a Digimon. Or

at least I will.

MAX
(Nervously)

Heh, ya. Looks like it.

YUNA'S DIGIEGG HATCHES AND OUT COMES A NYOKIMON.

YUNA

Wow! It's so cute!

WE SEE THE DIGIMON ANALYZER SCREEN COME UP WITH NYOKIMON'S
STATS. WHICH SHOW US THE FOLLOWING INFORMATION: NYOKIMON;
LEVEL: 1; TYPE: NONE; HP: 20

YUNA (CONT'D)

I've always wanted a Digimon. I never

thought I'd have one, though.

WE CAN SEE MAX AND YUNA TALKING AND LAUGHING, BUT WE DON'T
HEAR IT. FROM WHAT WE CAN SEE, THERE'S CHEMISTRY BETWEEN THE
2 OF THEM.

MAX (V.O.)

And I never thought that my Digimon

would ever be able to do what he just

did. But he did it to protect me. I

thought it was so cool that he was

able to do that. And this new Destiny

Tamer, Yuna, seems to be pretty nice.

I wonder what the next Tamer will be

like? I can't wait to find out!

FADE TO BLACK.



END OF EPISODE ONE

AGodofIrony - July 28, 2007 07:40 PM (GMT)
Cool Spoony!

It looks like it'd make a great Flash, Comic, or even just the written word!

If you do decide to do something with it, I can't wait to see!

Clown Prince of Crime - July 28, 2007 09:28 PM (GMT)
Thanks... heh, looking at this, though, I'm not too surprised that not very many people read it. The format along with the length probably would scare most people off... but thanks for braving it to give me an opinion. XD

I'll probably need to redo this first episode if I ever plan to make more of this... I dunno.

Anywho, thanks for the commentary. ^_^

AGodofIrony - July 28, 2007 09:47 PM (GMT)
Heh, I admit, it did throw me a bit at first, but it was still easy enough to read and understand. To be honest, I thought some of the length of the thing was comments and such. And length? Longer it is, the more to enjoy!

Hope you do redo this! I want to know what the token thing is about!

And welcome!

devastation - July 29, 2007 09:41 PM (GMT)
thats a pretty good story i know i should check but have you tried fanfiction.net? you should post it up there thats how i found the forum and yes, AGodofIrony sent me! :LOL:

Clown Prince of Crime - July 30, 2007 02:37 AM (GMT)
Hmmm... come to think of it, maybe I should get a fanfiction.net account. Thanks for the comment and welcome to the SRB! ^_^




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