Title: Bloodstorm:Rebirth
Rex Haven - March 27, 2008 06:59 PM (GMT)
Long ago in a distant land called the Darastrix, a little amle had been forn. but to this it was the time and the year of the blood storms to be come in as a natural weather. His name was rex was because the way he looked like was a skunk half reptilian fur. As rex looked up at his mother seeing her the first time as he giving a a good long smile with a open mouth as for a good yawn. feeling that his mother cleaning him off and getting of the blood that she had birth him. " My cute little rex" she smiles and nosing his nose as she moves her arms to cradle him and to movnuver him into a breast feeding way. mother didn't care she always thought it was a natural to feed the baby when he was hungry. His mother suddly came to a still as she could hear something approaching. Nothing was said but to the fact the ears on her where twitching to hear where the sound was coming from. Mother got up putt rex in a strengthen hollowed long as she went to see what it was. all that he could hear was a distant screams in the pasture.
The Vidit of Light - March 27, 2008 07:24 PM (GMT)
Rex Haven, to properly start a regular RP, you need to first create a sign-up topic for character registration and general discussion of the RP in the sign-ups zone, then start the RP later, when people have signed up and such. If you want to try getting this RP off the ground, do that.
Unless the admins have something else to say about this.
Also, although I don't want to sound like a jerk, try to improve your spelling and grammar if you can, okay?
And try to break your RP posts into paragraphs if you can. That makes it easier to read.
Anyway, Rex, admins, does this sound good?
Crystal Rose - March 27, 2008 07:29 PM (GMT)
Sounds good with me TVoL :3
Yep Rex, please write a short summary of what your RP will be about in the sign-up part of the fourm as well as basic rules of you RP and any other important information we may need to know about. That way we can read over the information and decide if we would like to join :3
Rex Haven - March 27, 2008 08:39 PM (GMT)
yea sorry about that ... I already have 3 in stor for the chatacters but the pictures are gonna be a little problrm for me
Crystal Rose - March 27, 2008 09:17 PM (GMT)
Don't worry , you don't really need pics if you dont have them, just a short summary of you RP and whatever guidelines you may have. Check out Sama, AGoI and Vidit's various RP topics for examples on how to make an awesome intro signup post!
Rex Haven - March 28, 2008 01:33 PM (GMT)
ok ... I may have to re do this rp so that me and you can do one.. I really do have pic it just its not on my colleges computer it actually at home at my own house.
Dark Phazon - March 28, 2008 03:51 PM (GMT)
Are you even reading what everyone else is telling you?
1. You need to make a signups thread for any RP you make, so people actually have a clue what the heck is going on, and can properly join if, after looking through the signups-thread, they wish to join.
2. This picture business you are talking about is unimportant, as pictures are unneeded for making a signups thread. A summary of the idea and what your guidlines for the RP are is what is important for the signups thread.
3. No one has signed up for this RP, because there is no signups thread that explains the summary and guidlines, as those are needed to help anyone reading to decide if they actually would wish to sign up or not.
Rex Haven - March 28, 2008 06:06 PM (GMT)
Crystal Rose - March 28, 2008 06:36 PM (GMT)
Rex Haven - March 28, 2008 07:02 PM (GMT)
thanks and I will make the new and improved bloodstorm for people to join.. you know I like people helping rather than just shunding me away like other people do
Pokol Da'Erran - June 24, 2008 03:25 PM (GMT)
Hey Rex, this sounds like it might be good, but you may want to run a Spell Check :o
GoldenSama - June 24, 2008 06:23 PM (GMT)