Title: Leiva Keeka the Dragon.
Description: The story of my very first fancharacters
Knucxsonia - March 28, 2008 10:02 PM (GMT)
On the planet Earth, a young girl named Leiva Keeka was walking along Salt Lake. She lived in Utah, and she was a foster kid. Many times she had got parents, and many times they hated her. These parents were the worst of all of them. They won't even feed her unless she gives them $20.00. Worst part was, she only had $30.00. It would pay for one day, but she wasn't getting an allowance, like she got from her second pair of parents.
She looked down at her reflection in the salty lake. *Why does everybody hate me.* She asked herself. She got angry, and threw a rock in the water. She was going to throw another one, but when she picked it up.....it wasn't a rock. Before she even got a chance to throw it, she took a good look at it. It was yellow, and shaped like a crystal. *This must be worth a fortune! It just might pay for my breakfast!*
She put it in her backpack, and kept walking. Suddenly, she felt faint. To her, it looked as if the world was changing colors. Last thing Leiva knew, she was on the ground...staring at the "yellow" grass. She closed her eyes, then felt nothing, as if she fell in a very deep sleep. She didn't know it, but she was being transported into a different universe, where our favorate little blue hero is.
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You guys may not like this, but when I made Leiva, I made her a part of Sonic X, so she will still be on earth, but in a whole different universe.
Knucxsonia - April 4, 2008 10:32 PM (GMT)
On good ol' Mobius, an anthropomorphic dragon and his friend were working on a machine that looked like a surf board, and was able to travel through space. The dragon, Hemoth, was waiting for his eagle friend, Kirk, to get finished with it.
Kirk used the torch one last time, took the mask off and looked at his new machine. "Wow, Kirk! It looks....awsome!" Hemoth complemented "Thanks, bra. I always thought that the racing stripes were, like, totally sweet." Hemoth walked around it, looking at it's shining glory.
"Well, were do you plan to go first?" the dragon asked. Without a thought, the eagle said, "I just want to take this baby around the universe, man. I wanna go out of boundries! I wanna find another planet that has, you know, water.....so I can catch some narlly waves, bra!" Hemoth started to pace, wondering what other planet could have water. That is when he tripped on something.
"Dude! What was that!" Kirk asked his friend. "I don't know," Hemoth started. "Let me look." The blue dragon started to dig where he tripped, and he found a shiny green emerald. "Awsome! Lets put this baby in the Space Surfer!" Kirk yelled as he grabbed it from Hemoth. "Wait! Kirk, don't..." It was too late. Kirk allready put it in the Space Surfer.
Suddenly, a luminous glow appered around the machine. "Come on, bra! Let's ride!" hollored the excited eagle. Hemoth quickly got on the Space Surfer, and the glow swallowed them. They had no idea where they were going, but they were going to get there fast!
Knucxsonia - April 12, 2008 10:13 PM (GMT)
Racin' down the highway, Sonic the Hedgehog was running to get a break from the gang. That is when he saw an orange figure lying on the ground, unconscious. He stopped to take a look, and saw that it was a female anthropomorphic dragon. She had flames on her shirt, a red skirt, shoes with flames on them, and long dark orange spikes for hair.
*If she's anthropomorphic, then she must come from Mobius! I better show the guys.* he thought. He picked her up, ran, and was at the mansion in no time. He kicked the door, for his hands where full..
Inside the mansion, Knucx, Shadow, and Tails were having a guy talk, when they heard someone at the door. "I'll get it." Knuckles offered. He walked to the door and opened it. He wasn't surprised to see that it was Sonic, but he was surprised to see that he was holding someone.
"Hey there, Knuckle-butt! Can you help me with this?" Sonic asked. Knucx took her, and said, "As long as you NEVER call me Knuckle-butt again." The echidna took no hurry finding a random bedroom, and putting the unconscious dragon on a bed.
It wasn't long 'till Tails, Shadow and Chris were with Sonic and Knuckles surrounding the dragon. "She's moving! She's moving!" Tails yelled. She grunted and slowly sat up. "Ohh...what happened....where am I" She sluggishly opened her eyes, and looked around.
She was surprised to see all of these wierd creatures. "AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!!" She screamed. Everyone in the mansion plugged their ears at the high pitched scream. "AH! Please, kid, stop yelling!" Sonic shouted. "Who are you guys!?! Where am I?!?! Why am I here?!?!" She paused and looked at her self. "AAAAAHHHHH!!!! WHAT AM I!?!?!?!?"
Tails decided to answer all of the questions and introduce everybody. She just stared. "OK, so I'm a dragon, and you guys are from the planet Mobius. You are trying to save the world from this Dr. Eggman......" She asked. "That's right! What's your name anyway?" Tails questioned. She stopped, trying to remember her name. "Leiva. Leiva Keeka." She finally answered.
Knucxsonia - May 6, 2008 10:40 PM (GMT)
Hemoth and Kirk were traveling through a warp at the speed of light, when suddenly, the warp tunnel came to an end. They found themselves in a beautiful planet. The sky was blue, the trees were green, and under them was sparkeling greenish-blue water.
"Awsome!" Kirk yelled, "Another planet with water!" Hemoth looked around with wonder as they surfed the skies and watched the view. "I can only wonder what planet we're on!" Hemoth said.
Soon, the dragon and the eagle were zooming above the buildings and the trees. They saw people just walking around, paying no mind to them. Just minding thier own business.
Problem was, the two characters were paying to much attention to the ground, and didn't see the HUGE mansion in front of them! "Uhhh.....Kirk?" "Yeah, bra?" "THERE IS A MANSION IN FRONT OF US!!" Kirk lifted his head, and saw it. "AAAAHHHHH!" They both yelled.
They had a hard landing on one of the balconies. "Uugg. That was one harsh wipe-out.." Kirk stated as he rubbed his feathery head. "Great. The Space Surfer is destoryed." Hemoth complained. Kirk took a look at thier invention. "Your right, man. This just sucks.....big time." the eagle whined.
"Maybie someone's inside!" Hemoth brainstormed. He jumped off the mansion, and ran to the door. Kirk leaped off, and glided toward Hemoth. When Hemoth made it, he rang the door bell. Kirk landed beside him before it rang.
Fourtunately (or not), Chris was able to come to the door. When he opened it, he saw the dragon and the eagle standing in front of him. "Hi. I'm Hemoth, and this is my friend, Kirk. We accedentally wrecked our Space Surfer on the balcony over there, and we need a place to stay until it gets fixed."
"What a coincidence. Someone else like you is in a bedroom. Come on in." Chris said as friendly as possible. Kirk and Hemoth walked in, thanking Chris for his hospitallity. They decided to find a bedroom. "I'll go find the Space Surfer." Hemoth offered.
Knucxsonia - May 13, 2008 09:31 PM (GMT)
No one seems to be reading this, but I'm gonna update anyway ^v^.
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Hemoth walked about the hallways of the mansion, knowing that he could find the Space Surfer by looking out a certain window. He opened one door, and he saw.....her. Apperently, she saw him too.
"Wha.....what's your name?" he asked. Leiva blushed and answered, "L-Leiva. Leiva Keeka. Yours?" He came closer and said, "Hemoth." Leiva may have been in a bed, but Hemoth was able to give her a handshake.
"Yo, bra! Where have you....oohhh." Kirk said as he burst in the room. "Who's this hot babe?" He asked. Leiva blushed so hard that she was practicly red. "Her name's Leiva. Leiva, this is Kirk. He's my friend."
"Why, hello, Kirk." Leiva said with the most polite voice she had. She found the streangth to get out of bed, and look around. "So, I guess I'm going to be here for a while. I would like to look around." she suggested.
"Have you seen our Space Surfer? We wrecked it on one of the balconies." Hemoth asked. Leiva paused for a while. "I think I heard it crash in that direction." she pointed. "Thanks, babe." said Kirk as he winked. Leiva blushed some more as the guys left to look for the Space Surfer.
tinmanti - May 17, 2008 07:12 PM (GMT)
Don't worry, I'm reading it ^_^
I think it's pretty cool actually. Nice lil' fun read :)
The Vidit of Light - May 17, 2008 07:58 PM (GMT)
Yes, and kind of been keeping an eye on this myself, even if I still can't outline the plot. :heh:
Knucxsonia - May 17, 2008 09:09 PM (GMT)
Allright! I do believe it's time for another fancharacter to step in....
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Past the skies and past the atmosphere, a creature (female, by the looks of it) was soaring through space. Who was she? How could she servive space without a suit? How did she get in the Solar System?
She came from Mobius.....but how did she get here? Her name was Midnite.....Midnite Star. She was an anthropomorphic hedgehog with a blue body, black hair, gray quills, and wore a cerulian shirt with a black skirt. And by the looks of it.....she was pretty lonely.
Her past was quite astonishing. At the age of 4, she was taken from her mother, and became a project at the space laboratory. She was given a chemicial that would help her hold her breath for up to 10 hours, and have her travel space at a pace 10 times faster than any of our space shuttles!
It could also make her respratory system able to survive any type of air (for example, if you locked her in a room with a car on for 3 hours, she would still be alive). Midnite was then sent into space at the age of 10. She then found a Chaos Emerald, and it sent her to our solar system. She has been to every planet in it! Exept....Earth.
She is now 15, and has been in space for 5 years. She wants to visit that little blue planet, for it reminded her of her home in Mobius. So, she dived toward the blue planet, and was moving at a velocity that Sonic couldn't beat! She was then almost burning in the atmoshere! At least untill she landed in the water.
Midnite Star got her head out of the water, and looked around. *Maybe...maybe this place will have a home for me* she thought.
Knucxsonia - May 21, 2008 10:30 PM (GMT)
Leiva, Hemoth, and Kirk were outside the mansion. Leiva couldn't believe that she already made friends! It was like she was never lonely. She looked up, and saw what looked like a shooting star. "Hemoth! Kirk! Look!" she said as she pointed at the sky.
Her friends looked up, and saw what she saw. "I somehow know what your thinking, Leiva. That couldn't be a shooting star!" said Hemoth. "How couldn't it be?" Leiva asked. Kirk squinted at it. "Dude! It's not even from space!"
The dragons gasped. "We gotta go see what it is!" Leiva suggested. That's when she ran toward the city. "Wait! Leiva! Wait for me!" Hemoth yelled. Kirk spread his arms (which double as his wings) and flew.
Sonic saw what they were doing, and ran toward them. When they got to the shore of the city, they watched the water. "Hey! I see something!" Leiva shouted. "Correction.....you see someONE" Kirk corrected. When it came closer..."Ooooooo! A someGIRL!!"
She walked out of the water, and stared at the dragons, the eagle, and the just arriving hedgehog. "Hello! I'm Leiva!" "I'm Hemoth" "I'm Kirk, babe." "And I'm Sonic! You are?" She just stared at them....then she answered, "H-h-hello....I'm M-M-Midnite. Midnite S-S-Star."
"Do you stutter?" asked Sonic rudely. "Sonic!!!" Leiva yelled. "N-no. I j-j-just haven't t-t-talked in f-f-five years." Midnite answered. "FIVE YEARS?!?!" they yelled in unison. "Don't w-w-worry. I'll p-p-probably get u-u-used to t-talking." she stuttered.
"I hope that's soon." mummered Sonic.
Knucxsonia - June 11, 2008 12:52 AM (GMT)
Sonic and the rest walked home to talk to Midnite. They learned of her past, and the planets she's been to.
"A-as you can s-see, the Martians are a-actually pretty friendly." Midnite finished. Leiva looked at Hemoth. "Wow! I'm never watching those Sci-Fi movies ever again." she stated. "It's a wonder how she EVER got to Saturn!" Sonic said.
In the desert, a creature was standing on one of the sand dunes. He was not a hedgehog. Though he looked a bit like one, though he had twice the quills that any hedgehog would have. He was a porqupine named Quigly. He didn't have much of an exciting past, but he had one.
He was brown with a red hat that he wore backward. By the way he smirked at the city, anyone could tell that he stole his food to survive. "Hmmmm.....I bet that there are some big time food stands in that big time city!" Quigly said to himself.
Quickly, well, 20 MPG quickly, he ran toward the city, hoping for something to eat.
Meanwhile, Midnite was making herself at home in the mansion. Kirk couldn't help but come in the room she was in, and talk to her. "Hey, Midnite. You, like, wanna have a talk?" he asked. She smiled. "Sure! I would l-love to." Kirk smiled too. "Great! So.....do you like to surf?" he asked. Midnite paused. "Well....I wouldn't know.....I don't even know what surfing is." she answered.
Kirk gauped. "What?!?! You don't know about surfing?" "Well.....I've been in a lab f-for.........six years. And I've been in space for five.....so I would have no idea." she stated. Kirk grabbed Midnite's arm, and ran. "H-hey! What's going on?!?" she asked. "I'm gonna teach you how to surf!" he yelled.
Hopfully, there will be waves....
Sammy-Star - June 16, 2008 12:17 AM (GMT)
this is kinda cute! i think i'll keep reading this... ;3
Knucxsonia - June 16, 2008 01:29 AM (GMT)
Thanx, Sammy ^v^.
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Quigly finally made it to the city. He looked at a fruit stand with apples, oranges, pears, and mangos. He smirked. "Jackpot." he said to himself. He waited for a good time to strike, and quickly went after an apple and a mango.
He went in a lone alley, and ate there. "Mmmm-mmmm. best mango I ever had!" he stated, taking another bite of the fruit. "He went this way!" an angry voice yelled. Quigly turned his head at that statement. "Uh oh." He ran away from the voice before the cops could find him.
Apperently, he dropped his apple.....and it had a bite out of it. A cop found it, and examened it. His partner came toward him. "Hey, Steve! What did you find?" he asked. The first cop turned around and shown his partner the apple. "Apperently, he was in a hurry to get away. We might find out who did it with the apple." said Steve.
Meanwhile, Kirk and Midnite where at the beach. Kirk brought his surf board that he brought from Mobius. "Well, Midnite. I am gonna show you how to surf. But first, we practice on the sand." He placed the board on the ground, and got Midnite to stand on it. "OK, just make this pose." he demonstrated. She copied him. "Like this?" she asked.
"Ya! That is goofy-foot, but it workes, right?" he asked. "Well, yeah! I c-can do it!" she stated. "Awsome! Now, I'll show you how to ride the wave." Then, they heard someone trip. "What was that?" Midnite asked. "I don't know, dudette. But we should check it out!"
Hemoth and Leiva where hanging out on a balcony, talking like there is no tomarrow. "So, you used to be human?" Hemoth asked. "Yeah. I miss being human a little bit. I just don't know how I got here. I just found this....crystal, and I fell asleep. I somehow ended up here." she said. "Wait....a crystal?" Sonic asked from behind them.
"Yeah....a crystal." Sonic ran to get Leiva's backpack, and looked inside. He was surprised to see.....it was a Chaos Emerald! He ran back to show them. "Is this it?" he asked. Leiva looked at it. "Yeah!" she answered. "This is not a crystal! It's a Chaos Emerald!" he yelled in surprise.
They gasped. "A Chaos Emerald? What's that?" Leiva questioned. "This is a power source that is more powerful then ever imagened! This is how I got here too!" Hemoth yelled. "You know of Chaos Emeralds?" Sonic asked. Hemoth nodded. "Yes. I had an incounter with one a while back. Because of it....I was separated by my mom...and the rest of my family when I was 8." "Really?" Leiva asked.
"Yeah." he answered. "But hey. If that never happened, I would have never met Kirk. His parents took me in after they found me."
Amy Rose the Hedgehog - June 16, 2008 02:00 AM (GMT)
Pokol Da'Erran - June 21, 2008 06:09 PM (GMT)
Your first fanfic has 8 chapters already, and mine only has 2 so far! You make me feel like a noob :( Wait I am a noob.
Knucxsonia - July 6, 2008 03:45 PM (GMT)
Wow! My sister AND the...sorta new guy! OK, back to the story!
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Kirk and Midnite finally made it to the bush where they heard the tripping noise. Kirk moved a couple of branches, and saw a porqupine stuck in a bush. He struggled to get out, but couldn't. He looked up at the eagle and the space hedgehog. "Hey, ummm, can you help me get outta this mess?" he asked. Midnite walked up to him, and got him out.
The porqupine brushed himself off with his hands, and looked back at the city. Then he looked at the two in front of him. "Oh, guys. I need help! Can you give me a place to stay until things get settled?" he asked. "Well, bra. We need to know your name first." Kirk stated. "Yeah yeah! Name's Quigly! Now can you help me?"
Kirk and Midnite looked at each other, and nodded. They took Quigly by the arms and ran toward the mansion.
Meanwhile, Hemoth was talking about his past. Leiva almost cried, and Sonic rubbed the brim of his nose. "Wow. You had quite a past." Sonic stated. "Yeah. I think of Kirk as a brother. I would have never got to where I am if it weren't for him." said Hemoth. "Wait! Why didn't you look for your family? Don't you miss them?" Leiva asked.
He looked at Leiva. "I looked...once. But then I realized that home is where you are surrounded by people that care about you. So, I stayed with Kirk." She was surprised by this answer. She would have said something about her past, but she heard something drop. It was a bedside table...and Shadow was standing next to it.
"Shads! What are you doing here?" Sonic asked. Shadow blushed and tryed to answer. "Uhhhhhh.....I....uhhh....wanted to listen to the blue dragon's story......" Hemoth walked up to him. "How much did you hear?" he asked. ".......All of it. I feel your pain of losing someone so close to you." Leiva came up to him, and gave him a hug. "Ug..er..ah! Please! Don't hug me!"he yelled. "Sorry" Leiva appologized, "I just thought that you needed a hug."
Pokol Da'Erran - July 6, 2008 04:22 PM (GMT)
Yes! FINALLY, we get another chapter! :w00t: And Shadow always needs hugs. He's a huggable person under all his issues. XD
Knucxsonia - July 13, 2008 07:13 PM (GMT)
Thanks, Pokol. Now for another chapie!
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Kirk, Midnite Star, and Quigly finally made it to the mansion. "WOAH! That is one huge joint!" Quigly yelled. The eagle and the space hedgehog opened the door, and walked in with the porqupine. When they got in, they had questions that needed answers.
"OK, Quigly. What did you need help with?" Midnite asked. Quigly thought for a moment. "I.........uh.....someone was after me!" he answered. "Who?" Kirk questioned. "A.....uh......wacko! Yes, a wacko!" he answered loudly. Kirk and Midnite looked at eachother, then Midnite looked at Quigly. All he could do was give out a nervious grin. "OK, who were you REALLY running from?" she asked.
Quigs sighed. "OK. The cops. I took some fruit....and now they're after me." Midnite went bonkers over this. "I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU DID THAT!!!!!! What would your parents say?" she asked. The porqupine looked down. "I don't have parents. I don't even have a home....let alone money. How else was I gonna eat? I ain't eating garbage!" he confessed.
Midnite stood by his side. "Sit. Tell me everything." They all sat on the couch, waiting for Quigs to say something. "OK. When I was born, my parents moved to earth. I don't know why, but it has something to do with getting away from Dr. Robotnik. When I was 2 years old, my parents dissapeared. I have no idea what happened to them. I was alone....in the forest....with no one to look up to....no one to care for me."
"Then....I came across someone. He was a hobo. His name was Rodger. He gave me the name Quigly....because of his favorite western movie. He watched it on his TV before he was a hobo. He taught me how to steal food, and how to walk the walk in the city. On my 16th birthday, which was two weeks ago, he told me I was able to go around by myself. I had a hard time separating......but I went anyway. That's how I ended up here." Quigs finished.
It turns out that Leiva, Hemoth, Sonic, and Shadow were listening. So, Leiva came over to give Quigs a hug. "HEY! HEY! Whats with the HUG?!" he yelled. "Sorry. I thought you needed a hug." Leiva appologized. *Where did I hear that before?* Shadow thought sarcasticly.
Pokol Da'Erran - July 15, 2008 03:54 PM (GMT)
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| It turns out that Leiva, Hemoth, Sonic, and Shadow were listening. So, Leiva came over to give Quigs a hug. "HEY! HEY! Whats with the HUG?!" he yelled. "Sorry. I thought you needed a hug." Leiva appologized. *Where did I hear that before?* Shadow thought sarcasticly. |
So, Leiva is giving out hugs now? *Slowly...Slowly...RUN AWAAAAAAAY!!!* :heh:
Knucxsonia - July 19, 2008 07:10 PM (GMT)
OK.....time for....the villians (bum bum buuuuum)!
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In the forest, a hedgehog (one that looked like Shadow) was stalking in the shades. She was looking for a way to cast her evil plan. She may have looked like Shadow, but she wore a black shirt, a black skirt, black shoes, and black gloves. Her stripes were pink, and she had pink eye shadow and pink eyes. Her evil plan? Well, eather she was making it up as she went along, or she had it planned.
What this female villian didn't know, was she was being stalked. Every fourth step she took, she looked back....but didn't see anything. The fifth time she did it, she had enough. "Allright, stalker! Come out to were I can see you!" she yelled. Then, a male voice that came from everywhere, but nowhere, said, "Oh! Don't you mean STALKERS?" Suddenly, two gray squirrels appeared in front of her. They came from nowhere.
"Who are you two?" she asked. "I am Mist, and this is my brother, Fog." the female squirrel introduced. "We are after the one called Shadow." Fog added. The hedgehog laughed. "Well, I'm not this....Shadow. I'm Merla. Merla the Hedgehog." She bowed. Fog and Mist looked at eachother. "Excuse us." said Mist. Merla waited as the squirrels had a private conversation. "Fog, this isn't Shadow!" "But Mist, we could use her!" "What?" "Look. This may not be Shadow, but Dr. Robotnik could use her instead!" "Hmmmmm.....you have a point! Good idea, brother."
The two went back to Merla. "Could you come with us, miss?" Fog asked. Merla thought for a while. If you know an evil person, you know what was in Merla's head. "OK. I'll come with you." Fog and Mist nodded, and grabbed her hands. Soon, they dissapeared into the air.....no....they BECAME the air.
EvilSpritist - July 20, 2008 12:27 AM (GMT)
Eh, not bad...but it's lacking something...
Knucxsonia - July 20, 2008 02:07 PM (GMT)
Pokol Da'Erran - July 20, 2008 04:25 PM (GMT)
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| What am I missing, cous? |
:Big:. No question.
EvilSpritist - July 24, 2008 02:58 AM (GMT)
I can't put my finger on it.
Knucxsonia - July 28, 2008 02:59 AM (GMT)
OK, lets just get back to the fanfic.
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At the mansion, Sonic and the rest (including Chris) were eating dinner. Apperently...it was spaggetti. While they were eating, a lot of them decided to talk about thier pasts. That is when there was a knock on the door. "I'll get it." Sonic offered. He got up, went to the door, and opened it. "Hello?" he asked. Then, a pink hedgehog jumped on Sonic. "HI SONIIIIIC!" she greeted. "Ug! Amy! Get off!" he yelled. "Oh, Sonic! I missed you!" Amy said.
"But...Amy....you were at the mall. How could you miss me that much?" he asked. "Well, let's just get you to the dining room. I met some new friends." he said, as he grabbed Amy's arm, and took her to the dining room. *Oh! He's touching me!* Amy thought. When they got there, Sonic got everybody's attention. "Hey Hemoth, Leiva, Kirk, Midnite, and Quigly, this is Amy!" he introduced.
Everybody new got introduced, and Amy found a seat...and some spaggetii. "So, Amy, what did you get at the mall?" Tails asked. Amy giggled. "Well, I got a cute bikini, some cookies, a mood ring, and a water squirter!" she said with a cute little girly smile. "Uhhh........why did you get a water squirter?" Quigly asked. "It's to get Shads to behave!" she answered. "And HOW would that help?" Shadow questioned.
Amy got off her seat, put some water in the squirter, and squirted Shadow. "HEY! What was that all about?!?!" he yelled. Amy squirted him again. "You yelled during dinner. Bad Shadow." "But I..." she squirted him again before he could finish his sentence. During the whole thing, everyone was giggling. Shadow got peeved. "Why I auta..." he got sprayed again. "Bad Shadow. Sit, and be quiet." he sat, and ate...with nothing more to say.
Meanwhile, Merla, Fog, and Mist were at Eggman's current lair. Fog and Mist were having a disscusion with Eggman.
"Why did you bring me that.....recolor?" he asked. "But, Dr., we thought that she would be good use!" Fog stated. "Plus, we couldn't find Shadow...and she is willing to help us!" Mist added. Eggman thought for a while. "Aha! I have an idea!" he got the squirells closer to him, and he whispered the plan. They thought it was good, and went back to Merla. "Merla, we are looking for two certain hedgehogs." Mist stated, as an image of Sonic and Shadow came on a screen.
"We need the black one to get rid of the blue one." Fog pointed. Merla got a good look at Shadow's picture. Evil thoughts went through her head. "So, miss, we need you to help us get Shadow here on our side. Deal?" said Eggman. She thought for a minute. She had a good plan to get this one to work. "Deal. I'll get this...Shadow, bring him here, and before that, he will be on our side." she said while shaking hands with Eggman. You could tell by the smirk on her face, that this was exactly as she planned.
Pokol Da'Erran - July 28, 2008 08:56 PM (GMT)
Woot to getting on with the fanfic!
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| Amy giggled. "Well, I got a cute bikini, some cookies, a mood ring, and a water squirter!" |
Ooh, cookies! Yum! *Amy runs away* Come back! I need to mooch your cookies!
Knucxsonia - August 9, 2008 05:21 PM (GMT)
Yay! Back on to the fanfic (which I have been putting off, sorry 'bout that. :heh: )
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Dinner was finished. Sonic, Shadow, and Leiva decided to take a walk outside, while Knuckles went with Tails to do something. Kirk, Midnite, and Quigly went up to a balcony, and the rest did something that I have no idea of.
On Sonic, Shadow, and Leiva's walk, they all had a chat. "I wonder if Amy's free tonight...." said Shadow. "HEY! She's mine!" yelled Sonic. Leiva rolled her eyes as the two fighted over Amy. Then....something rustled in the bushes. "What was that?" Sonic asked. "I bet it's a rabbit or something." Shadow answered. "I bet it's a girl! " Sonic yelled. "I bet it's a vortex from space." Leiva guessed. The hedgehogs gave her a questioning look.
"What? It's possible!" she yelled. Then, it rustled again. "Sadly, I'm not a vortex." the feminine voice said from the bush. "I am Merla. Merla the Hedge......oh! Will you look at that." she said as she gave a 'loving' look at Shadow. "Oh! Ummmm.....I'm Shadow. *cough* I am....uhh.....a hedgehog as well.....*cough*.....oh boy, hide me, Sonic." he said as he looked nerviously at Merla and Sonic.
"No way, Shads. If you wanna hide, Chaos Control your way outta this." the blue hedgehog complained. "Well, I'm Leiva. Nice to meet you ^v^." the dragon introduced. Sonic snapped his fingers. "Hey, dragon." "Yeah?" "You owe me five bucks." he said as he held out his hand for cash. "Ummm, if I may interupt, I need a place to stay." Merla said as she had the puppy eyes.
"Well, we..." Sonic's mouth was covered by Shadow's hand. "I can give you a home." he offered. "Really? Oh, that'll be swell!" she screamed in 'excitment'. "Well come on!" the black hedgie said as he grabbed her arm, and they ran away. Sonic and Leiva shrugged, and had to go the same place. Sonic would've ran off as well.....but he held out his hand. "The five bucks, please?" The dragon rolled her eyes, and gave him five bucks.
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Sorry, I had to make this short. PMing Tinman and working on a fanfic is hard work.
EvilSpritist - August 9, 2008 05:25 PM (GMT)
Oh, I know, kill freakin' Chris!
Pokol Da'Erran - August 12, 2008 06:02 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (EvilSpritist @ Aug 9 2008, 09:25 AM) |
| Oh, I know, kill freakin' Chris! |
That's it! Genius!
tinmanti - August 20, 2008 12:57 PM (GMT)
Woo! I finally got around to reading all the updates! XD
Keep it up!
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*cough* kill chris *cough*
Oh, I'm sorry, did I say that? :shifty:
Knucxsonia - August 20, 2008 02:46 PM (GMT)
You guys XD Just be patient! He'll be dead soon enough!
tinmanti - August 20, 2008 02:54 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (Knucxsonia @ Aug 20 2008, 02:46 PM) |
| You guys XD Just be patient! He'll be dead soon enough! |
Yay!
Sorry, Chris can be so annoying... and after what he did to Sonic X, he just gets on my nerves so much XD
Knucxsonia - August 30, 2008 02:11 PM (GMT)
Yes....we all know what that moron did to Sonic X. Well....let's get back to this fanfic which I should have updaed sooner XD
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Shadow, Merla, Sonic, and Leiva made it back to the mansion. Apperently, Sonic and Leiva were able to catch up to the two black hedgehogs before they got there. "There are a lot of people here to meet! You'll have a lot of friends." stated Leiva (being childish, I am). "Hey, let's bother Knucx!" Sonic thought out loud. So, the four went to the basement, and saw Knuckles and Tails with a punching bag.
Leiva couldn't help but ask, "What the heck are you two doing?" The two looked at Leiva. "I'm training Tails!" Knucx answered. "I'm sort of a wimp." Tails added. Sonic rubbed the brim of his nose "And....what are you training for?" The echidna made a smirk, "Oh, you'll see. COME ON, TAILS! PUNCH THAT BAG!" he yelled as the kitsune kept punching the bag franticly.
"Let's go meet someone else." Merla suggested. They went outside and left Knucx and Tails to thier business. Outside, Hemoth was with Kirk....and they were about to do the crazyest thing. "OK, Kirk. Take some deep breaths." The eagle did just that. "OK.....now we are ready.....TO EAT THIS GIANT DEEP DISH CHOCOLATE PIE!" Hemoth yelled. "Boo yaa!" said Kirk as the dragon and the eagle dug into the pie.
That is when Leiva came in. "Are you guys eating a giant chocolate pie?" she asked. They looked at her with chocolate-covered faces, "No." they answered. "Oh, forget the pie. I want you guys to meet Merla." The hedgehogs then walked outside. "Hello, I'm Merla." she introduced. Hemoth didn't like the looks of this so called innocent hedgehog. She didn't seem......trustworthy.
"Yo, Hemoth. She looks like Shadow!" Kirk yelled. "That's called 'recoloring', Kirk. I don't wanna bring up this crap." the blue dragon complained as he walked inside. Leiva followed him, wondering why he wasn't being very socialable.
Pokol Da'Erran - September 1, 2008 05:10 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (Knucxsonia @ Aug 30 2008, 06:11 AM) |
Yes....we all know what that moron did to Sonic X. Well....let's get back to this fanfic which I should have updaed sooner XD
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Shadow, Merla, Sonic, and Leiva made it back to the mansion. Apperently, Sonic and Leiva were able to catch up to the two black hedgehogs before they got there. "There are a lot of people here to meet! You'll have a lot of friends." stated Leiva (being childish, I am). "Hey, let's bother Knucx!" Sonic thought out loud. So, the four went to the basement, and saw Knuckles and Tails with a punching bag.
Leiva couldn't help but ask, "What the heck are you two doing?" The two looked at Leiva. "I'm training Tails!" Knucx answered. "I'm sort of a wimp." Tails added. Sonic rubbed the brim of his nose "And....what are you training for?" The echidna made a smirk, "Oh, you'll see. COME ON, TAILS! PUNCH THAT BAG!" he yelled as the kitsune kept punching the bag franticly.
"Let's go meet someone else." Merla suggested. They went outside and left Knucx and Tails to thier business. Outside, Hemoth was with Kirk....and they were about to do the crazyest thing. "OK, Kirk. Take some deep breaths." The eagle did just that. "OK.....now we are ready.....TO EAT THIS GIANT DEEP DISH CHOCOLATE PIE!" Hemoth yelled. "Boo yaa!" said Kirk as the dragon and the eagle dug into the pie.
That is when Leiva came in. "Are you guys eating a giant chocolate pie?" she asked. They looked at her with chocolate-covered faces, "No." they answered. "Oh, forget the pie. I want you guys to meet Merla." The hedgehogs then walked outside. "Hello, I'm Merla." she introduced. Hemoth didn't like the looks of this so called innocent hedgehog. She didn't seem......trustworthy.
"Yo, Hemoth. She looks like Shadow!" Kirk yelled. "That's called 'recoloring', Kirk. I don't wanna bring up this crap." the blue dragon complained as he walked inside. Leiva followed him, wondering why he wasn't being very socialable. |
Wow, Hemoth and Kirk love chocolate pie...
Sorta reminds me of my own fondness for muffins.