Title: Of Men and Beasts
Description: Soleanna was only the beginning of it...
The Vidit of Light - September 6, 2008 05:48 AM (GMT)
This is it, ladies and gentlemen, the sequel to The Soleannan Crisis!
The Soleannan Crisis galvanized nations, from the U.S. to Europe to Japan, to renew their commitments to the war on terror. Troop deployments and crackdowns began across the Earth, and it seems to be working. With increased military and intelligence assets after all sorts of terrorist organizations from across the globe, global terrorism is down, numerous known terrorists have been captured or dispatched, and global terrorist activity is down. Finally, as Dr. Ivo "Eggman" Robotnik was captured by G.U.N. forces in the mountains in Soleanna, he has been imprisoned in the rebuilt Prison Island and is awaiting trial.
A few months after the events told of in TSC, Didymus has been transferred back to the U.S. (remember, a version, at least, of Earth) for some "R&R"-not technically that, as with troop deployments up, less of that is affordable, but he's been transferred to Fort Patton, a military base outside of Station Square (which is itself on the coastline in central, NOT northern, California, let's say).
This RP will get into numerous things, such as a look at how G.U.N. is organized, more insight into what happened on the ARK 50 years ago, and why Silver and Blaze have come. You know what to expect from a Sonic RP run by me, so sign up, please! ^_^
Didymus (he also has a last name, I just haven’t quite decided on what it should be)
Race/Species: Human
Gender: Male
Ethnicity: Caucasian
Hair color: Brown
Eye color: Brown
Skin color: light tan, on most parts that see sunlight often
Height: 6 feet, give or take a few inches
Age: Late teens
Occupation: G.U.N. soldier
Rank: Major
The only teenager to ever hold the rank of major in G.U.N.’s history, Didymus was awarded that rank due to the fact that he is blessed with uncommon valor paired with a skill in military tactics and strategy beyond his years. He has seen action as a frontline soldier, a behind-enemy-lines special forces soldier, and as a tactical commander. He was decorated for valor during the Black Arms invasion, and is also skilled with most every modern firearm and body armor employed by first-rate military forces to date, in addition to multiple forms of "unarmed combat". Being a Christian, he attributes his successes to God, and is blessed with a metaphorical “heart of gold”. He can be relaxed and sociable at times, but can often be serious and alert when others are simply messing around.
Anyway, some characters are reserved for certain people, provided they join. Basically, if you had them in TSC, you've got first dibs on them in this RP.
So again, in mockery of what they may say in various internet gaming zones:
LIEK OMGOSH FUN GAME COME QUICK!!!!oneoneone!!!111!!!!!
Cast list:
TVoL:
Didymus
Braxton
Rouge
Maybe more
Irony:
Mighty
Espio
Charmy
Vector
Metal Sonic
Issai
GS:
Knuckles
Eggman
Sonic
ES
Dr. Vex
EMU 87
Fang the Sniper
Omega
Cojo
Shadow
KxS
Leiva
Hemoth
Zorac
Synge
CH
Sam
AGodofIrony - September 6, 2008 06:01 AM (GMT)
Okay!...I still want the Chaotix, Mighty, Metal Sonic, Issai and The Marvelous Meerkat/Martin Meerkat.
I'll do actual sign-ups once I finish the thing for B&I, Vidit.
Also, go Nor-Cal!
Sign-ups!
Name: Vector
Age: 21
Alignment: Good
Brief Bio: Leader of the Chaotix, Vector is a strong alligator with a sense of justice. He's always looking for a job for himself and the other Chaotix.
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Name: Espio
Age: 16
Alignment: Good
Brief Bio: A ninja, Espio is a member of the Chaotix. He's strong and very loyal to his friends.
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Name: Charmy
Age: 6
Alignment: Good
Brief Bio: The youngest of the Chaotix, Charmy might seem like a hyperactive child at times, but he's brighter then he seems, and always willing to help people out.
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Name: Mighty
Age: 17
Alignment: Good
Brief Bio: Formerly part of the Chaotix, Mighty is now part of the Soleanna Royal Guard, watching over Princess Elise.
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Name: Metal Sonic
Age: N/A
Alignment: Evil
Brief Bio: The metallic copy of Sonic, he's obsessed with killing the original, and becoming the strongest. Like his creator, Eggman, he wants to take over the world.
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Name: Issai
Age: N/A
Alignment: Evil
Brief Bio: The 'son' of Metal Sonic, Issai is the self proclaimed new Ultimate Life Form, made from the DNA of the heroes (think Cell from DBZ). He's very headstrong, and his strategy is to use overwhelming force against his opponent(s). Issai is very loyal to Metal as well.
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Name: Martin Meerkat/The Marvelous Meerkat
Age: 16
Alignment: Good
Brief Bio: Self proclaimed Hero of Soleanna, The Marvelous Meerkat has the power of invulnerability...And that's it. He's not super strong, invincible, a genius, and can not fly. However, he has a strong sense of justice, and is inspired by Sonic the Hedgehog.
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Double M:
Name: Major Richard Peterson (He's been promoted!)
Age: 39
Alignment: Good
Brief Bio: An Intelligence Officer in G.U.N., he's accepted a recent promotion, but as for why exactly, he'll just tell you that "the pay's better, and sooner or later I'll have to retire, no?" with a grin on his face. He almost always knows more then he lets on, though it tends to just be conjecture and not actual information. He's willing to bend the rules if it'll help people though.
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(You know, I realized Peterson changed a lot more then I originally had plans for!)
(Almost forgot Doom!)
Name: Black Doom
Age: ??
Alignment: Evil
Brief Bio: Having returned in a hedgehog form, Black Doom wishes to take over the planet, and create a group of followers to do so. He is ancient and strong, but he still has yet to regain his former power.
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Name: Scourge the Hedgehog
Age: 16
Occupation: Being bad
Alignment: Evil
Brief Bio: The 'evil twin' of Sonic, Scourge is from a parallel universe where, to put it simply, alignments are flip flopped. He's evil to the core, opposite of Sonic being a hero through and through. He's taken in energy from the Master Emerald, turning himself green, and giving himself a power boost.
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GoldenSama - September 6, 2008 06:27 AM (GMT)
This time, I'm actually going to be active! :D
Name: Knuckles
Age: 16
Alignment: Good
Brief Bio: Knuckles is the Guardian of the Master Emerald and of Angel Island, a warrior of unrivaled strength, and a total short-tempered hothead who is easily gullible.
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Name: Sonic
Age: 15
Alignment: Good
Brief Bio: Sonic is the laid-back, adventure-loving, super-speed hedgehog hero!
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Name: Dr. Ivo "Eggman" Robotnik
Age: ??
Alignment: Evil
Brief Bio: Dr. Eggman is Sonic's arch-enemy and the main force of bad-stuff in Sonic's world. He's a crazy scientist who traps small animals in robots, builds giant robots and pretty much misuses science for evil.
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AGodofIrony - September 6, 2008 06:34 AM (GMT)
Oh yah! If no one's going to take Sonic, I'll sign up for him as well, if that's okay.
Obviously, if someone wants him, take him! I have plenty of characters.
GoldenSama - September 6, 2008 06:35 AM (GMT)
I kind of want Sonic, but I haven't decided yet. I need to figure out if I'll actually use him extensively or not. I dropped the ball last time.
The Vidit of Light - September 6, 2008 06:38 AM (GMT)
Well, you while you guys figure it out, I'll start on a cast list. Glad to see you're aboard. ^_^. Actually, GS, we know how your other villain worked last time, I think it, for the most part, at least, worked out fine. And you could go for Eggman, if you're looking for villains, but you'd have to use him as I told you to...unless you could convince me otherwise. :heh:
And obviously, he wouldn't see too much action at first except for sitting around on Prison Island and making court appearances...:LOL:
EvilSpritist - September 6, 2008 03:22 PM (GMT)
I'm back, and I'll reprise my role as EMU 87. I'll also join as Fang the Sniper.
And, as Vidit said, this sounds like an RP of mystery revealing, so I'll sign up as EMU's creator. (He was only reffered in the prequal)
Name: Dr. Vex
Race/Species: Human
Gender: Male
Hair color: Gray
Eye color: Black
Skin color: Pale
Height: 6'0
Age: 51
Occupation: Robtician
Rank: Scientist
Bad/good: Bad
Affiliation: His own
Appearance: Wears a suit, and a lab coat. He is balding, and wears a pair of goggles.
The creator of EMU 87, and his master. He lives in the Scrap Metal Zone, and is at work creating the strongest robots to take over the world. He has hatred of hedgehogs. He helped create the hedge-dragon, and was ploting to use them as an army, but they were unstable. In general, he prefers to attack by using heavy weapondry and vehicles. He also has many potions on him that he uses to power himself up. His prized possesion is one chaos emerald (If okay with you vidit).
Cojo - September 6, 2008 05:45 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (GoldenSama @ Sep 5 2008, 11:27 PM) |
This time, I'm actually going to be active! :D
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Agreed! :D
May I claim The Ultimate Lifeform, Shadow the Hedgehog?
The Vidit of Light - September 6, 2008 06:01 PM (GMT)
Cojo, regardless of whether or not his "title" suits him, Shadow's been reserved for you.
And ES, I'm afraid I'm going to have to keep a chaos emerald out of your Dr. Vex's hands. We'll have enough of those being tossed around as is.
EvilSpritist - September 6, 2008 09:26 PM (GMT)
Dang.
Joking. I don't mind. :p
Anyway, may I also have E-123 Omega? And I suppose I can play with Eggman, unless some one else wanted him reaaaaly badly and you didn't want him Vidit.
Everything else check out?
GoldenSama - September 6, 2008 09:52 PM (GMT)
Actually ES, he sort of offered Eggman to me, and I never did respond to that.
Though, odds are, I won't take him.
I love playing Eggman and have usually had some incarnation of him, but I'm not sure I want to be told how and when to use him. If you meant you'd tell me what he's up to and then allow me to accomplish (or try to accomplish) his goals but I had enough freedom to be creative, that'd be cool. But if it's a real strict thing, then I must pass.
I'll probably come up with some villain, I just dunno who yet. Maybe Mammoth Mogul? Or Ixis Naugus? Hmm... I dunno. I'll think of someone!
EvilSpritist - September 6, 2008 10:05 PM (GMT)
Eggman's yours GS. I was just responding to the fact he said anyone can have Eggman, but if you want him, you can have him. (Unless Vidit says otherwise)
Also, I guess it's a good thing BR's not around. *Cough*Mammoth Mogul*Cough*
The Vidit of Light - September 6, 2008 11:55 PM (GMT)
Telling you what he's up to and allowing you to be creative like that could work, Sama. If you're up for that, I'll put Eggman in your roster. Although like I said, at first, he'd be doing little more than sitting in Prison Island and making appearances in a trial everyone knows he's going to lose. XD.
Does that mean that Irony gets Sonic, or do you still want him partially, or what? He can go either way.
And as for any other "Archie/SaTAM villains", just make sure you clear their backstories with me, would you? Thanks. Although if I do say so, the adaptation of the Dark Legion wasn't bad at all.
And if you discard them (which you are totally free to do, as far as I'm concerned), why would Knux be away from Angel Island (as they're the ones who stole it in TSC)?
And ES, you can have Omega, but you'd have to remember, he's less of a villain and more of an "anti-hero".
With that said, people, I urge you to do some official sign-ups.
AGodofIrony - September 7, 2008 12:31 AM (GMT)
First post has been editted with actual sign-ups!
Knucxsonia - September 7, 2008 12:54 AM (GMT)
OK! Info it is!!!
Name: Leiva
Age: 13
Species: Dragon
Gender: Female
Bad/Good: Good
Appearence: She's an orange anthropomorphic dragon. She wears a sleavless shirt with flames on it, a red skirt, and shoes with flames on them. She has darker orange spikes on her head, and going down to her tail. I would put an image in here, but I get tired of the whole ImageShack thing.
Name: Hemoth
Age: 14
Species: Dragon
Gender: Male
Bad/Good: Good
Appearence: He's a blue anthro dragon. He wears nothin' but a pair of shoes that reach up to his knees. He has a darker blue set of spikes on his head that looks a bit like a mohawk, and darker blue spikes going down to his tail.
Name: Zorac
Age: 17
Species: Hedge-dragon
Gender: Male
Bad/Good: Good
Appearence: He's a gray anthro hedge-dragon. He has hedgehog quills, but he also has dragon spikes and a dragon tail. He has three big spikes on his head
Name: Synge
Age: 16
Species: Dragon
Gender: Female
Bad/Good: Good
Appearence: She is a pink anthro dragon. She has long pink spikes hanging from her head like hair. She wears a shirt with no sleeves whatsoever, and denim capris. She can breath fire, so she can be quite dangerious.
The Vidit of Light - September 7, 2008 01:12 AM (GMT)
Nice, Irony, but you forgot one thing:
Mobius doesn't exist in the "timeline/universe/what have you" that this RP takes place in. Sonic would be hailed as a hero of Earth, (and by some, perhaps, THE hero of Earth, rightly or otherwise) not Mobius.
And KxS, even though we may know your charas, give us a retread of their bios, please.
And some local Station Square...locals...
Station Square
A bustling city on the coast of central (NOT northern :LOL:) California, Station Square, in addition to being the residential place of over one million human beings, is also the city with the highest known anthropomorphic animal (I shall refer to them as "anthros") population on Earth: about 275 or so. Yes, they're something of a rarity. Regardless, Station Square is prosperous, and sports numerous signs of that, from how busy it is pretty much 24/7 to the skyscrapers in downtown Station Square where numerous businesses are headquartered. You can find all sorts of places to stay, eat (in fact, here or there you'll find a restaurant or shop owned and/or operated by an anthro, but it's rare), have fun, etc. It's a big, bustling American metropolis.
Station Square Suburbs
Just as the name implies, the Station Square Suburbs are suburbs surrounding Station Square itself. Plenty of people live here, and it so happens that most of Station Square's antro population lives in a section of it nicknamed "antro town". Cream and Vanilla have a house there.
Chaotix Detective Agency
Somewhere in Station Square is none other than the house and office of none other than the Chaotix Detective Agency. Although busniess is usually slow for them (and their contract with G.U.N. was terminated months ago, but they were paid as was discussed), they stand ready and eager to investigate any matter that is brought to their attention, provided it's honest work and there's money to be had.
(I take it you've got no objections to that, Irony?)
Amy Rose's apartment
A small but cozy apartment in which Amy Rose resides in downtown Station Square (preteen though she is/may be). Apart from a small living room and kitchen, it contains her room, which is decorated in pink, and among other things, has a life-sized picture of Sonic with a heart around it on the floor.
Twinkle Park
An advanced theme park well-known in Station Square, in contains all sorts of rides and attractions, and occasionally has a special-"Cute couples get in free".
Fort Patton
Named after, well, if you don't know that, find yourself a book on World War Two (the European Theater), Fort Patton is a military base a few miles from Station Square. Unlike the Upsilon Base, Fort Patton is fully staffed, supplied, and completed.
AGodofIrony - September 7, 2008 02:30 AM (GMT)
Ah, sorry. Just use to typing out 'Hero of Mobius.'
While it's awesome you put Station Square in Nor-Cal, I gotta ask, you do know there is no large cities in Nor-Cal? I should know.
Sacramento and San Francisco is more Central California, for one.
Just, little thing...:heh:
The Vidit of Light - September 7, 2008 04:13 AM (GMT)
Well, Station Square is a fictitious city. Nonetheless, your point is valid, and so let's say that it's in central California instead.
Southern California would be too common.
GoldenSama - September 7, 2008 05:07 AM (GMT)
Well, I did want him, but AGOI already signed up as him so I guess I was a bit too late. O-well.
I will take Eggman, then! And I guess Eggman and Knuckles will be my only two.
AGodofIrony - September 7, 2008 05:19 AM (GMT)
GS, if you want Sonic, you can have him! I don't mind, I have enough characters as it is.
EvilSpritist - September 7, 2008 11:58 PM (GMT)
I'll do official sign-up when I have time.
GoldenSama - September 8, 2008 12:13 AM (GMT)
You sure, man? I don't really need him. But yeah, I would like him if you don't mind.
AGodofIrony - September 8, 2008 12:15 AM (GMT)
The Vidit of Light - September 8, 2008 01:25 AM (GMT)
So, Sama takes Sonic, as well. Alright, then. And perhaps, if Joha doesn't show, I may take Rouge (unless someone else wants her).
EvilSpritist - September 8, 2008 08:52 PM (GMT)
ES's
official sign ups here:
Name: Engineer Mech. Unit 87 or EMU 87
Race/Species: Robotic engineer class
Gender: None(But is considered male)
Ethnicity: None
Hair color: None
Eye color: Red
Skin color: Metal(Silver)
Height: 6 feet
Age: 4
Occupation: Engineer
Rank: Unknown as of now...
Bad/good: Currently bad
Affiliation: Black Doom
Appearance: He looks a little like a pit droid from Star Wars in general, but is silver.
Background info: EMU 87 was reactivated a long time ago, and was sent off. He burned down the Hospital, but no one seems to know. He then went to Soleanna Forest, where he joined Black Doom and Sammy.
Name: E-123 or better know as Omega
Race/Species: E-100 series robot
Gender: None(But is considered male)
Ethnicity: None
Hair color: None
Eye color: Red
Skin color: Red metal
Height: 4.11
Age: Unknown
Occupation: Depends. If we'd follow the comic series, he'd be on sides with G.U.N. If we're following games, he's acting on his own. He also seems to only like working with Rouge and Shadow, two friends from the past.
Rank: Once again, depends.
Bad/good: Anti-hero, neutral
Affiliation: Depends once more. Could be with G.U.N or alone.
Appearance:

Background info: Omega E-123 has a strong dislike for Eggman and his robots, reffering to them as inferior. He also thinks of himself as stronger than any other robot. He has several concealed weapons, everything from a machine gun to a bazooka. He is also good in hand to hand combat, but is mainly the heaviest and slowest character in the Sonic Series.
Name: Fang the Sniper
Race/Species: Weasel
Gender: Male
Hair color: Purple and white
Eye color: Black
Height: 3 ft 4 in
Age: 22
Occupation: Gun for hire, hitman, bounty hunter, even a body guard. Depends who hires him.
Rank: none
Bad/good: Neutral (Anyone can hire him, but he seems to prefer evil)
Affiliation: Depends on who hires him.
Appearance:

Background info: Fang the sniper hails from the special zone, as a gun for hire. He acts purely on greed and will work for riches and wealth, although he seems to blow almost all of it at a casino. He is also an avid gun collector, and often meets with the Yakuza and Mafia. He recently moved to Soleanna City to find more work.
I've already entered Dr. Vex. Anyway, TVOL could you tell me which Omega is?
The Vidit of Light - September 9, 2008 01:22 AM (GMT)
This RP takes place in the "game timeline", if you call it that. Does that answer your question about Omega?
Let me see...still waiting for Cojo to do formal signups.
If Joha doesn't come back...
Rouge the Bat
Age: 17? 18? 19? Something like that.
Bio: Rouge was in Soleanna during the crisis there, and has been paid well for her role in preventing it from escalating. Nonetheless, she continues to travel the globe, looking for jewels and such to plunder, and happens to find herself now in Station Square. Deciding that hanging around there could be good for her (it did have a fancy museum anyway) she is unaware of what she's about to get caught up in...
Image: You all know what she looks like.
Also, is anyone else interested in this? Is anyone else going to sign up? Because if not, then I may as well start the RP soon. Although I would like more people.
Knucxsonia - September 9, 2008 01:31 AM (GMT)
I put in some more official sign-ups...now everybody is happy ^v^.
.....I wish that I signed up an evil character....I just can't find one that I could play. I'm always playing with good characters....barely bad :blink:
ChaosHalberd750 - September 9, 2008 09:49 PM (GMT)
Hmm.....Seems interesting. Wasn't able to join the last, but, better late than never, right?
Name:Sam the Hedgehog.
Race/Species: Hedgehog.
Gender: Male.
Ethnicity: ......Not sure, just gonna say KBA.
Hair color: Black, with green.
Eye color: Dark Brown.
Skin color: ....Hedgehog+Skin=????
Height: 5"9
Age: 14
Occupation: None, probably.
Rank: None.
Bad/Good: Good.
Affiliation: .....He's probably alone, but on the side of good.
Appearance: Think Sonic, but with the above color.
Background info: A wanderer from the hidden Jeng tribe, he prefers to side with which side he's met first, and their ambitions. Has helped Sonic and the gang once or twice, and has powerful ablities. When angry, he glows with crimson red energy, and his stats get a 70% increase. Wears gloves, Soap Shoes, has brown eyes, and his fur is green with black.Wields a energy blade named Chiharu, it has a final form, along with magical ablities he knows, coupled with a wealth of stamina, speed, and agility, it makes him a formidable fighter. He acts like a pretty serious person, but when people get to know him, he's actually nice.
EvilSpritist - September 10, 2008 12:13 AM (GMT)
Thanks TVOL. So Omega's workin' alone.
Cojo - September 10, 2008 03:26 AM (GMT)
Ah man official signups? Sorry I didnt know you were waiting for me to do that
Name: Shadow The Hedgehog
Age: Over 50 appears 17
Alignment: Anti-hero
Brief Bio: Shadow is the Ultimate Lifeform, having direct access to the Chaos Force which allows him to use a variety of special attacks like Chaos Control, Spear, and Blast. Can often be swayed into working on sides, and then switching depending on how it furthers his goals.

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The Vidit of Light - September 14, 2008 03:35 AM (GMT)
Okay, official sign-ups have been taken care of, and I don't know if anyone else wants in (right now) who's here, so how's about I start this RP?
AGodofIrony - September 14, 2008 03:37 AM (GMT)
EvilSpritist - September 14, 2008 04:22 AM (GMT)
AGodofIrony - September 25, 2008 05:59 PM (GMT)
Hey Vidit!
I've updated my character list with Scourge the Hedgehog.
Makin' sure he's okay.
Also, do you have any particular plans for the Chaos Emeralds?
The Vidit of Light - September 26, 2008 10:22 PM (GMT)
Okay, I guess Scourge is alright. I shall update the cast list.
As for the chaos emeralds, I only have three of them with "comfirmed positions", and Silver's probably going to get his hands on one eventually.
The Vidit of Light - October 11, 2008 07:40 AM (GMT)
Double posting, with bios!
(Due to concerns about stealing bandwidth, and what exactly that even is, I will eschew posting images here. Besides, you all know these charas well enough. :D).
Amy Rose
Age: 12(?)
Bio: Kind-hearted and cheerful, Amy Rose, despite her age, has an apartment and lives, practically, as an adult. An excellent cook and able to wield her hammer rather proficiently, she continues her quest for Sonic's heart with the same obsession we all are fond of (or hate).
Blaze the Cat
Age: 14(?)
Bio: Hailing from an alternate dimension of sorts, Blaze is here with Silver to stop "something horrible". Fast, agile, and pyrokinetic, Blaze is formidable, and, although somewhat shy, will help those she sees are in need.
Silver the Hedgehog
Age: 14(?)
Bio: Having come from the future, Silver has been uneasy these past few months. He knows that something is about to happen, so he's been uneasy. Telekinetic and ready to lay down his life to accomplish his mission, Silver looks ahead with apprehension.
(And a pair of possibilities that may or may not appear too often...)
Miles "Tails" Prower
Age: 8 (somehow...)
Bio: Miles Prower, or "Tails", as everyone calls him, is a mechanical genius. Friendly and devoted to Sonic, he always tries to chip in and do his part to save the day, using both his mechanical prowess and his ability to fly with his twin tails.
Name/alias: Elise the Third
Race/species: Human
Hair color: Red
Eye color: Blue/sea-green
Skin color: Whitish to light tan
Height: Somewhere between 5 and 6 feet.
Occupation: Head-of-state, "Soleannan Royal Government"
Age: 17
Bio: In the months following the Soleannan Crisis, Elise worked hard to try to ensure that it would never be repeated, going over Soleanna's policies and security measures. Although she was somewhat reluctant to leave Soleanna, she had been working hard and it was decided that she get a vacation. She finds herself on the U.S. west coast now, in none other than Station Square.
If anyone else wants any of these charas, let me know.
Antony the Bat - October 11, 2008 09:17 AM (GMT)
Name:Angel the Bat.
Age: 23.
Date of birth: N/A.
Place of birth: blue bat cave zone.
Species: Bat.
Gender: Male.
Alignment: Hero.
Bio: Angel the Bat is a blue bat who always enjoyed his chilli dogs and Angel the Bat dreams that one day he gets to become a hero to all of mobius.
Eye Colour: Blue.
Skin Colour: Yellow.
Hair Colour: Brown.
Height: 3 feet.
Occupation: Guardian.
Rank: Champion.
Bad/Good: Good.
Affiliation: 23 years ago Angel the Bats parents got robotersized by Dr Ivo Robotnik hoping to capture the brainwash Angel the Bat to defeat Sonic until Angel the Bat got rescued by Sonics own uncle Chuck the blue hedgehog which 23 yers later Angel the Bat continued his own legacy as the guardian that he promised Uncle Chuck the blue Hedgehog on Uncle Chucks birthday.
Strength:Love, Friendship and Chaos Emeralds.
Weakness: Fire.
Ability: Super Speed and Super Strength.
AGodofIrony - October 13, 2008 01:07 AM (GMT)
Hey Antony...I hate to be the bad guy...but...
Well, your character is kind of a Gary Stu...His bio is, well, lacking and assuming things that may or may not be even true, or sort of suddenly inserting your character into the canon characters lives with little reason to.
There's no real reason too. Plus, you talk about 'the mobius war.' In this RP, it's been established the world is called Earth, for one.
As for being raised by Chaos and Tikal, well, that kinda contradicts the Sonic storyline as well.
He also has a lot of abilities, which makes him a bit overly powerful.
Like, the other OCs don't have that many abilities. My own, Martin Meerkat/The Marvelous Meerkat just has one.
So, sorry, but your character needs some work. If you want some help, I am more then willing to work with you.
EvilSpritist - October 14, 2008 05:36 AM (GMT)
Things you may wish to edit:
Name:Angel the Bat. (Nothing wrong, but it seems to be a little to goddly)
Age: 23. (Nothing wrong)
Species: Bat. (Okay.)
Gender: Male. (Okay)
Alignment: Hero. (Okay)
Bio:Been Rouge the Bats prom date back whenthey was at treasure hunter high school and went face to face with Knuckles in a sparring circle at Edchina Karate. (This is where you get messed up. You really can't have strong relationship with a sega made character. Rouge is 18, and with most anthros, she doesn't seem to have attended school. Knuckles, is stuck on Angel Island meaning he never had anything to do with Rouge or anyone else for that matter for some time.)
Eye Colour: Blue. (Okay)
Skin Colour: Yellow. (Okay)
Hair Colour: Brown. (Okay)
Height: 3 feet. (That's very short. Thought I'd throw that out there.)
Occupation: Freedom Fighter. (There are no freedom fighters in this RP)
Rank: Champion. (I don't exactly get this rank)
Bad/Good: Good. (Okay)
Affiliation: family died in the mobius war and raised by Chaos the guardian of the Chao along with Tikal the protector the master emerald as a mother figure. (There is no mobius. Also, he can't be raised by Tikal or by Chaos, as A: They are trapped in the master emerald and B: if he was born in Tikal's time, he'd be around anywhere from 200-300 years old[I think])
Appearance: A male bat wearing karate edchina karate club uniform. (Okay)
Ability: Prediction, Super Speed, flight, Super Strength and Teleportation. (Here is where you became a godmodder. Almost all OC's have 1, 2, or no powers at all. Such as Martin the meerkat who has only one ability, and my character Dr. Vex who has none with the acception of being a great scientist)
Strength:Love, Friendship and Chaos Emeralds. (Heroes have other motivations)
Weakness: Dark Chaos Emeralds. (I don't think there is such a thing)
The Vidit of Light - October 14, 2008 05:58 AM (GMT)
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Name:Angel the Bat. (Nothing wrong, but it seems to be a little to goddly) (The name is fine.)
Age: 23. (Nothing wrong)(Yes.)
Species: Bat. (Okay.)(Yes.)
Gender: Male. (Okay)(Yes.)
Alignment: Hero. (Okay)(Yes.)
Bio:Been Rouge the Bats prom date back whenthey was at treasure hunter high school and went face to face with Knuckles in a sparring circle at Edchina Karate. (This is where you get messed up. You really can't have strong relationship with a sega made character. Rouge is 18, and with most anthros, she doesn't seem to have attended school. Knuckles, is stuck on Angel Island meaning he never had anything to do with Rouge or anyone else for that matter for some time.) (Most of ES's comments are valid, but there is an exception: it was kind of established in TSC that Didymus and Rouge were acquainted, but considering their respective occupation, it was understandable. And they didn't have dating history. (What happened in the RP itself wasn't entirely under my control, so don't start with me there. :LOL:) And yeah, Knux probably rarely, if at all, goes into a sparring circle, and yeah, did Rouge even attend high school? Probably not, although she had to learn her skills somewhere.)
Eye Colour: Blue. (Okay)(Yes.)
Skin Colour: Yellow. (Okay)(Yes.)
Hair Colour: Brown. (Okay)(Yes.)
Height: 3 feet. (That's very short. Thought I'd throw that out there.) (Yes.)
Occupation: Freedom Fighter. (There are no freedom fighters in this RP) (Yes, not as in the group calling themselves that in SatAM and the Sonic comics.)
Rank: Champion. (I don't exactly get this rank)(Me neither.)
Bad/Good: Good. (Okay)(Okay.)
Affiliation: family died in the mobius war and raised by Chaos the guardian of the Chao along with Tikal the protector the master emerald as a mother figure. (There is no mobius. Also, he can't be raised by Tikal or by Chaos, as A: They are trapped in the master emerald and B: if he was born in Tikal's time, he'd be around anywhere from 200-300 years old[I think]) (Yes, although (Sonic Adventure SPOILERS!) Tikal and Chaos aren't in the Master Emerald anymore, they finally passed on at the end of SA, and yes, no Mobius.)
Appearance: A male bat wearing karate edchina karate club uniform. (Okay) (Yes.)
Ability: Prediction, Super Speed, flight, Super Strength and Teleportation. (Here is where you became a godmodder. Almost all OC's have 1, 2, or no powers at all. Such as Martin the meerkat who has only one ability, and my character Dr. Vex who has none with the acception of being a great scientist) (Yeah, maybe that is, well, overpowered. In fact, I guess it is.)
Strength:Love, Friendship and Chaos Emeralds. (Heroes have other motivations) (True, but he can have just those if he chooses.)
Weakness: Dark Chaos Emeralds. (I don't think there is such a thing) (There isn't. Even if there is in the comics, this isn't regarding the comics.)