Title: The Black Emerald: Stolen!!!
Description: Issue 1 up...it's very short.
Description: Issue 1 up...it's very short.
Mist Falcon - October 21, 2005 02:10 AM (GMT)
Sorry about the text in Issue 1. The reason Issue 1 is so short...it's a prologue.
issue 2 is a little bit longer and the text is better.....so enjoy.
issue 2 is a little bit longer and the text is better.....so enjoy.
BlueRush - October 21, 2005 02:31 AM (GMT)
Oooh, very good MF. ^_^ I like where you're going with this, keep it up! :D
Be careful on the lettering... you should either put the words in boxes like GS or get extra empty space in the backgrounds like moi.
Also, be aware: The Black Emerald is what I called Shadow's special just-for-him fake emerald, built by Robotnik, in FtE. ^_^; That way Shadow always has an emerald. Not to be confused with your Black Emerald, which is probably the more real one, as I stole the idea from Archie. XD
Be careful on the lettering... you should either put the words in boxes like GS or get extra empty space in the backgrounds like moi.
Also, be aware: The Black Emerald is what I called Shadow's special just-for-him fake emerald, built by Robotnik, in FtE. ^_^; That way Shadow always has an emerald. Not to be confused with your Black Emerald, which is probably the more real one, as I stole the idea from Archie. XD
GoldenSama - October 21, 2005 02:38 AM (GMT)
I like it! It looks pretty cool, and you've got a interesting storyline going on. You gonna make more? I'd like it if you did.
The only thing: you should find a better system for the text. It's hard to read, just put on there like that. Maybe like little speech bubbles. Or a script at the bottom. Or text boxes. Or something.
The only thing: you should find a better system for the text. It's hard to read, just put on there like that. Maybe like little speech bubbles. Or a script at the bottom. Or text boxes. Or something.
Mist Falcon - October 21, 2005 02:44 AM (GMT)
Yeah...the speech thing..
Oops. I saw a sprite for emeralds and I thought the Black Emerald was interesting...so i thought I would use it.
Oops. I saw a sprite for emeralds and I thought the Black Emerald was interesting...so i thought I would use it.
BlueRush - October 21, 2005 02:57 AM (GMT)
S'okay. ^_^ Just didn't want people to get confused. :)
Mist Falcon - October 23, 2005 08:33 PM (GMT)
TBE: Stolen issue 2 is up
GoldenSama - October 24, 2005 04:42 AM (GMT)
I like it.
Do you save the images as JPEGs, BMPs or PNGs? Cause PNGs show up the best quality when posted on the net. Just curious.
Do you save the images as JPEGs, BMPs or PNGs? Cause PNGs show up the best quality when posted on the net. Just curious.
Mist Falcon - October 24, 2005 09:39 PM (GMT)
JPGs usually......thanks for the advice.
Crystal Rose - October 26, 2005 12:51 AM (GMT)
hehehe very cute! Kepp going! I cant wait to read more!
Mist Falcon - October 26, 2005 01:29 AM (GMT)
I'm going to update tomorrow......im going to try to make the background better.