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Title: Homunculi Maker
Description: Make your own Homunculus!


BlueRush - October 29, 2005 03:13 AM (GMT)
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Credit goes to C_R for the awesome pic. ^_~ Thanks, C_R!!

Well, that's pretty much it! :D
Of course, because I'm not really an evil person- *hides flansaber* -my homunculi must be good.* Here's an easy-to-understand chart.

Seven Deadly Sins-------Seven Contrary Virtues--------Seven Holy Virtues
------Pride------------------------Humility-------------------------Faith
------Envy------------------------Kindness------------------------Hope
------Wrath-----------------------Patience------------------------Love
------Sloth------------------------Diligence-----------------------Prudence
------Greed-----------------------Liberality-----------------------Temperance
------Gluttony--------------------Abstinence---------------------Fortitude
------Lust-------------------------Chastity------------------------Justice

Basically, there's two sets of seven virtues.* I can't decide which one to use. So you have fourteen names to work out of- I'm hoping to see some cool Homunculi here!! :3

*Feel free to use names not presented here, even making bad guys, but it'd be cool to see the whole 'virtue vs. vice' thing, don't you think? Oooh, and remember, the homunculi we see on the show were not the first of their name!! "Another Lust"! Which means, you can make new ones from all three columns!

Um, do we need definitions? O.o; If so, I'll post some.

Name: Patience
M/F: Female
The Ultimate: Focus
Ouroboros on: Her left nostril
Red Lines: Forming a smiley face on her back
Abilities: To leave the DMV without being angry
History: Lives in a giant clock tower, but never looked at it even ONCE! :o
Appearance: ~All kidding aside, get creative here. Pics, descriptions, sprites, I'm sure whatever you do, it'll be awesome! ^_^ May I suggest Pokemon trainer sprites?~

So that's an example. Copy/paste this:

Name:
M/F:
The Ultimate:
Ouroboros on:
Red Lines:
Abilities:
History:
Appearance:

Any other info, add that too! :D Have fun! :3

GoldenSama - October 29, 2005 09:12 PM (GMT)
AWESOME!

I'll make some as soon as I get ze time to use paint!

Mist Falcon - October 29, 2005 09:58 PM (GMT)
Explain to MF....???? How do you do these????

BlueRush - October 29, 2005 10:41 PM (GMT)
^_^ No prob MF.

There are seven "Homunculi" -fake humans- in FullMetal Alchemist.

Lust
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Gluttony
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Envy
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Sloth
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Greed
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Wrath
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Pride
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They were made by the Philosopher's Stone. Design your own using the setup!! ^_^ Any more questions?

GoldenSama - October 30, 2005 12:45 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (BlueRush @ Oct 29 2005, 05:41 PM)
Pride
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LMFAO!

That's priceless.

Kimiko - October 30, 2005 05:11 AM (GMT)
Coolness! I'll totally make one...once I can get on more and meh scanner stops being teh world's biggest buttface ><

BlueRush - October 30, 2005 05:23 AM (GMT)
Awesome! Glad some people are into this!

I've got a couple good ones, namely Love and Justice, which I'll post when it's not 1:30 AM. Hmmm.... maybe I could write a fanfic about this if I got a good team of seven here.... ;)

Crystal Rose - October 30, 2005 06:42 PM (GMT)
I call Faith ^_^ hehehe I allready drew it I just need to scan later ^_^

Mist Falcon - October 30, 2005 07:00 PM (GMT)
I get Hope. I'll make it soon.

Crystal Rose - October 30, 2005 09:52 PM (GMT)
Is it okay if I have Wrath and Patience too, im going to try the whole "twin thing" ^^

BlueRush - November 6, 2005 05:53 AM (GMT)
*pushes button*

Click! Whirr! Out pops a Homunculus! :D

Name: Love
M/F: Female
The Ultimate: Grace
Love IS the most powerful thing ever, at least according to Dumbledore. The Ultimate Grace is the kind of power you hear the name of right away, but don't find out what it does until the end of the series when BAM! deus ex machina. In other words, I don't know. XD
Ouroboros on: her heart. Duuuuh.
BLUE Lines: Good homunculi have blue lines, of course! XD The length of her arms from shoulders to wrist, then on her sides from underarms to ankles.
Abilities: Kind of a leader- she's love. I dunno, she is really kind to people. Not to be messed with though. Kinda like Aslan from Narnia- really good, but also terrible to behold. Depends on if you're good- or evil-hearted.
History: Her boyfriend tried to resurrect her. Or something.
Appearance: See below.

Name: Justice
M/F: Male
The Ultimate: Balance
He's blind, but you still can't knock him down. Could've been called the Ultimate Limbo, as he can balance on any part of his body and remain erect.
Ouroboros on: Right hand.
BLUE Lines: Two rings on his arms, stripes down front of body. As represented on his suit.
Abilities: One of the darker of the good guys. He'll dispense justice, good or bad. Mostly bad. >:3 Take that, shoplifters! Slice!
History: Uhhh....
Appearance: See below.

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Now post yours! :D ....please?

Celeste - November 6, 2005 05:14 PM (GMT)
hehe,I should try this....Just lemme draw one ^_^ maybe I should do Envy...

GoldenSama - November 6, 2005 08:30 PM (GMT)
I made the New, New Lust and the New Greed last night, but didn't have time to post them. I'll post them as soon as I'm on my other computer.

BlueRush - November 6, 2005 08:39 PM (GMT)
Awesome!! ^_^ Thanks, guys!

Say, I made a new Lust too! ;)


clicky
XD

GoldenSama - November 7, 2005 05:39 PM (GMT)
:o

THAT's your new lust?

-and now, a SK&WS moment, inspired by BR-

~Open To: Dante's Cottage~

Dante: Now my new apprentice, let's see your homunculi!
CHoW: Yes master! *reveals new lust*
Dante: . . . Are you SURE you're a supervillain, and not just some comic relife guy?
CHoW: u_u;

EDIT: Greed and Lust return!

Name: Lust (III)
M/F: Female
The Ultimate: Temptation
Umm, she can secrete a pheromone that robs men of their senses and turns them into her mindless zombie warriors.
Ouroboros on: her chest, like ze other lust.
RED Lines: down her legs
Abilities: Just like "no man can kill the witch king" in LOTR, no man can kill her. But not because of a creepy curse, but because her pheromones effect chemicals in the male brain that cause men to be her evil zombie warriors. Homunculi are NOT effected.
History: A man's wife died and he tried to bring her back, and make her the perfect beauty, but it went arry because of the human alchemy thing, and boom! Lust the Third!
Appearance: user posted image

Name: Greed (II)
M/F: Male
The Ultimate: Shield, once again
Ouroboros on: back of his neck
RED Lines: arms
Abilities: All the same as before
History: He is actually the same Greed as the first Greed – that girl with the tattoo on her face; I forget her name, the one that hid inside Al in “Theory of Avarice”… Anywho, she studied alchemy and then picked up a guy in a bar and used human alchemy on him to transmute a new Greed, then she bound this Greed with the first Greed's memories.
Appearance: user posted image

BlueRush - November 8, 2005 01:14 AM (GMT)
:3 Those are SOOO awesome, GS!! ^_^ I like the new Greed- you shall live on!! :0
And the new Lust definitely has the appropriate Lust powers... good show. :D

The girl's name is Martel... I'd ship Martel/Alphonse, but, well,.... :( Poor Marta!

As for my new lust... XD I WAS a comic-releif sidekick once ya know.
Dante? You mean the old herbalist lady? If she's my evil boss I might be in trouble... XD

Ooh! I know! She can be the Sidious to my Vader! XD

DARTH DANTE. XDD


GoldenSama - November 8, 2005 01:18 AM (GMT)
MARTEL! Yeah, I was trying to think of her name.

She doesn't die, does she? O.o I hope not.

Martel/Alphonse? Hmm... I never would have even in a million years thought of that pairing; BUT when you mention it, I can acctually see a lot of potential between the two. I like it. <(^0^)>

But I am glad you told me her name.

DARTH DANTE! XD Hilarious!

You know Dante is more than an old herbalist lady. u_u; THAT'S A SPOILER!? I thought they revealed that already! I'm sorry!

BlueRush - November 8, 2005 01:25 AM (GMT)
And that wasn't? :o

It's no prob with me, GS, because I love spoilers, but you should cover that up somehow. X_X;

But.... wow. That... that's something else.
Hmm, maybe she's also their grandmother? I dunno. I don't wanna know.


Yah, in the manga at least, Martel, um.... ;_;
Thanks a lot Pride. >:(

GoldenSama - November 8, 2005 01:28 AM (GMT)
Whoops. I thought that stuff was revealed in the episode I missed the week before last. I guess not. *edits*

EWW. >.< No, I hope not. Granny Dante. Eww.

X_X Aww. Stupid Pride!

Wait... Manga Pride, or Anime Pride? Cause Anime Pride is Wrath in the Manga.

BlueRush - November 8, 2005 01:36 AM (GMT)
Um, wait.. which one is which? ^_^;

Don't wanna say his name, here's a pic...

*spoiler*



;) It's Manga Wrath. XD My bad.

GoldenSama - November 8, 2005 01:38 AM (GMT)
Oh. That one kills her.

THAT BLOODY ~whoa GS! Don't say that!~

Hey, do you have any places where you can view the manga? My site only shows up to Chapter Forty. You know any past that one?

BlueRush - November 8, 2005 01:40 AM (GMT)

GoldenSama - November 8, 2005 01:42 AM (GMT)
^_^

Thank you. I own you so much BR.

BlueRush - November 8, 2005 01:45 AM (GMT)
;_; You OWN me?

XD I just got PWNed by GS. XD
That's great! I lurve typoos.

Hmm, next I shall do......... um, Fortitude. ^_^

GoldenSama - November 8, 2005 01:50 AM (GMT)
XD

Oh, I meant "OWE". Hahah!

Celeste - November 8, 2005 08:48 PM (GMT)
Lust...uh...I lost count :P

I'm not really sure how to do it,you guy's can make a profile:P I probably did it wrong anyway -_-'

GoldenSama - November 9, 2005 09:40 PM (GMT)
Name: Gluttony (II)
M/F: Male
The Ultimate: Garbage-Disposal (XD)
He'll eat ANYTHING, and I do mean anything. People, rocks, cars, tin cans, bottles, paper, animals, chimeras, echidnas, dogs, other homunculi... and when he's eaten everything around him, he naws on his own foot. XD
Ouroboros on: in the folds of his stomach. ~_~
RED Lines: Circling his bellybutton
Abilities: He can chew through any substance, and he never, ever gets full.
History: (You'll love this one!) A skinny man wanted to win an eating contest, so he used alchemy on his stomach... unfortunately it fried his brain and turned him into a never-ending eating machine. XD
Appearance: user posted image

And now my first GOOD homunculi!

Name: Faith
M/F: Female
The Ultimate: Spirit
Ouroboros on: Back of her Neck
BLUE Lines: on her back
Abilities: She can use alchemy, unlike other homunculi (sans Wrath)
History: Faith is the daughter of a famous Alchemist, but she came down with a horrible disease and her father used alchemy to cure it -- or at least he tried. Human alchemy = no no; boom! And Faith was born.
Appearance: user posted image

BlueRush - November 9, 2005 11:37 PM (GMT)
Awesome homunculi, d00ds! ^_^ Absolutely awesome!! 'Specially that pic of Lust II, Celeste, once again your art is fantabulous!!

LOVE Faith, GS. ^_^ She's officially in my future fanfic "Vice and Virtue", whenever I start it. XD

But! I have a couple of constructive criticisms.

1) Love's ouroboros is on her heart. ^_^; Since Love is more heartish than Faith, would you mind...? Unless you want me to move...?
2) What does the Ultimate Spirit enable her to do?
3) Wrath can do alchemy because he has human parts. Does she have human parts, and if so, where did she get them?
4) It's my understanding that "human alchemy" only occurs when one tries to *create* a human. Did she die, and then her father tried to resurrect her?
5) Generally homunculi dress in the sold color, black or white, with blue/red stripes showing. But that green dress is SO adorable! :3

Hope you don't take those too roughly. X_X; Sorry. But now I have another most excellent character, besides the recreations, I can really start thinking about this fic. Keep 'em comin'! :D

GoldenSama - November 9, 2005 11:55 PM (GMT)
1) O.o Oops. I forget. Well then, uh, we'll change it to somewhere else. You find a place. XD
2) A good question. I was thinking her speciality was just being able to do alchemy, so I didn't really think of anything else. If you think she needs something else I'll make it.
5) Pride(Anime)/Wrath(Manga) doesn't, and Sloth, while she does have a black dress she wears sometimes, also has her "normal" clothing when she's her alter-ego. Can't explain better since those two are spoilers. >.< I hope you know what I'm talking about. Although if you must, turn the dress white. u_u; I just like green.

As for three and four, you're right, so, yes, she DOES have humans parts. I should explain better.

Extended History: She came down with a very deadly disease and her father, who is one of the "Twelve Alchemist" (the 12 best state alchemist in the world) used his alchemy to try to save her. The disease was in her arm. Her sister, who was an alchemist, volunteered to help her father while they tried to use alchemy to fix her; in the process she died, creating a homunculi, and her sister's arm was taken through the gate which turned into her arm, which in turn gives her the ability to do alchemy. :3 Her father lost his sight because of the gate (Like Izumi lost her insides) and her sister now has an automail arm.


BlueRush - November 10, 2005 12:06 AM (GMT)
1) Um, I dunno. Her, uhh, calf? X_X; The small of her back? Her ear? Her neck? ..Ooh that last one might not be bad.
2) She does need something else. Though I'd say with a name like 'Faith'... sounds like she'd have a precognitive power something like the luck potion in Harry Potter #6. Just a suggestion... but either that or her alchemy would have to be weak... or she could just not be a fighter. ^_^
3) and 4) Hmm, seems kind of suspect... but sounds good enough! :D So she died, but because it was so soon nobody died?
5) Ahh, of course. Awesome then, I like it too. ^_^

Awesome job, GS. Love to see info on the familia. ^_~

Fortitude will be on the way... obviously I'm favoring the far right column. Whoever does Hope has to do a good job though, as (s)he'll be major along with Love and Faith..

GoldenSama - November 10, 2005 12:14 AM (GMT)
1) Neck sounds good to me too. ^_^
2) Ooooh. That sounds good. Like the luck potion stuff. Precognative... hmm... AH! She has a precognitive sixth sense that allows her to have an incredible intuition. She can almost tell what is going to happen in the near future. Kinda like how Pride can see every possible outcome of an enemy's attack before they do it.
3) and 4) Okay, how about this? After the original failed alchemy that killed her, blinded her father, and took her sister's arm, the sister and father created a homunculus from their daughter/sister. So she did die, but they transmuted her into a homunculus.

You know what? I'm liking this a bunch... I'll just do what I do best and WRITE. I'll write you out the entire scene of Faith's creation as I picture it in my mind. I'll do that while I'm watching Lost tonight, and then I"ll post her creation on here and you can alter it/edit it however you want for you fanfic. ^_^

It'll be fun. :3

BlueRush - November 10, 2005 12:17 AM (GMT)
~le joy~

Absolutely rockin', GS. ^_^ And they transmuted her soul into the homunculus, right? Like Al? *because as you know no homunculus keeps their soul*
So she has a blood seal too! Boy, she's gettin' cooler and cooler by the second.

Faith: I be tricked out, yo!

XD And the precognitive stuff sounds good... but with the alchemy, if she's a fighter, it may be to much. What's her personality like? A fighter?

And because she's so intuitive, she has 'faith' that everything will turn out okay, because it actually will! :D

GoldenSama - November 10, 2005 12:20 AM (GMT)
A fighter? No-no! She can't stand violence. She's a peacekeeper and peacemaker.

If you like, we can do away with her being able to do alchemy... but I thought it was cool. :3

But she hates conflict and violence. She's very outgoing and very nice to everyone; a compassionate soul. She doesn't ever let people worry and always cheers them up. She only results to fighting if she absolutely has too.

BlueRush - November 10, 2005 12:37 AM (GMT)
Awesome. She'll be one of the main characters. :D

Can't wait to see that minific. ^_^

GoldenSama - November 10, 2005 01:07 AM (GMT)
I put the first part of the minific in the fanfics section, and will write more of it tomorrow.

... ^_^; turns out lost isn't on till eight. Hahah, my bad!

BlueRush - November 10, 2005 03:48 AM (GMT)
More! :D
I decided to make my own Hope, but I'd love to see another version, and am TOTALLY open to replacing yours with mine. ^_^

Name: Hope
M/F: Female
The Ultimate: Inspiration
---She can extend her emotions to those around her, usually that of hope, but can
---be other emotions too, like anger or fear
Ouroboros on: Her right shoulder. A patch is cut out from her shirt so you can see
---it. Though you can't see this in the pic. :P
BLUE Lines: Rings on her shoulders and legs, connected by lines, and a line down
---her center
Abilities: One of the Three Theos Virtues, Hope acts as a co-ordinator for the
---homunculi. In the background, always working, driving everyone ahead, Hope
---is active and out there fighting the good fight.
History: Um. Fortitude's history will make up for this...
Appearance: See pic below.

Name: Fortitude (which means 'bravery' BTW)
M/F: Male
The Ultimate: Aim
---The power to shoot anything correctly, especially throwing knives...
Ouroboros on: His chest. In the exact place where he was shot to death...
BLUE Lines: In odd positions on his chest and legs. Almost like some kind of
---uniform...
Abilities: He's a really friendly guy, but passionate about his friends and will fight
---powerfully to defend. One of the best of the good homunculi, something about
---him seems kinda familiar...
History: See below the pic below...
Appearance: See pic below...

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BADABING!
Fortitude's History: You know him, you love him, you hated to see him die...
If you haven't figured it out yet, you may be dumber than Pride(SpongeBob)...

IT'S HUGHES!! :D

Thaaaaat's right! Who wouldn't want Hughes to come back to life? NO-ONE, that's who. Now, how did it happen, you ask?

...uhhh...

Ooh, I got it! Elicia grows up to be an alchemist, and she--

Wait no.

Um. *points* Look behind you! Gasp!

*runs*

GoldenSama - November 10, 2005 05:05 AM (GMT)
HUGHES! :3:3:3:3:3

Ooooh. That's a GREAT idea BR. Hughes the Homunculi.

"Rooooooooooy! I'm back! So... WANNA SEE SOME PICTURES OF ELICIA!"

XD

Although it seems your history is a bit lacking Captain Rush. -_-'

With your permission, might I take a crack at giving him one? If you don't like it you can throw it away in ze trash can and whatnot. XD

BlueRush - November 10, 2005 05:31 AM (GMT)
;_; YESH. Please. XD I can't think of one... it IS 12:30 after all...

I'd love it if you think of one. :D

GoldenSama - November 10, 2005 04:25 PM (GMT)
Yay! ^_^

Happy dance time: :party:

I can think of three different versions for Hughes-Homunculi to be created from; so I'll write those right away... and I'll finish Faith's history. :P

BlueRush - November 10, 2005 04:27 PM (GMT)
Awesome!

Also, view my latest creation- the original homunculi!!


*spoilers*





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Also Dante. :D

Greed II was about 4 times the size of the other guys for some reason, and the resize looked kinda odd, so I copied it to the best of ability. ^_^; If that's okay.

And I think I'm going to do strict homunculi uniform ones for Pride and Sloth like I did with Greed... though I like their civilian clothes a lot. ^_^ Especially the new Greed's - blue is definitely his color! :D

EDIT: Here's a version I grande-sized. :D

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