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Title: RP For Beginners
Description: Eggman's Latest Plot!


AGodofIrony - January 14, 2006 01:42 AM (GMT)
(Alright! It's time to start this up! First, our cast.)

Main Characters

sonicahero as Sonic

Sailor N as Amy

For supportives (You experienced people.)

JOHA as Rouge

Cojo as Shadow

And of course, me! As Eggman and Metal Sonic.

000

"Muhahahahaha!" Eggman laughed manically. He turned to his creation, Metal Sonic.

"Metal!" He barked, "Bring Sonic a message. Tell him and anyone who wants to tag along to head to my base if they wish to take the Chaos Emeralds from my grasp! You know the plan!"

Metal Sonic merely nodded, and blasted off.

000

Metal Sonic blasted into Tails' Workshop unexpectingly and strode to Sonic, who had gotten into battle posistion.

"Message from Eggman. He challenges you to get to his base and take the Chaos Emeralds from him!" Metal Sonic said. "You may bring whoever else wants to along with you!" With that, Sonic's metal doppelganger blasted off, heading back to base.

"Looks like a brand new adventure!" Sonic shouted.

(Alright, there you go! Get to the Rping!)

Sailor N - January 14, 2006 01:51 AM (GMT)
Amy was just about to have lunch in the Mystic Ruins, when she saw Metal Sonic's blur go inside Tail's workshop. Thinking that it was Sonic's blur and not Metal Sonic's, she giggeled and jumped down. She ran towards the workshop a fast a possibal.

She ran inside the workshop, barely puffing at all"WERE'S SONIC WERE'S SONIC!?!" She loudly yelled while looking around. She started to randomly smash things in case he
was hiding.

sonicahero - January 14, 2006 02:09 AM (GMT)
After recieving the message from Metal Sonic, the blue blur decided to figure out why Eggman told him to get the Chaos Emeralds from his base. Could it possibly be a trap?

He was remembering all the times he had been tricked by Eggman, so someone else would be nice. Who would come though?

Walking outside, he stumbled upon a clue, He picked it up and grinned, "I gotta show the others!"

P.S if I didnt any thing wrong just tell me and I will come fix it. ^_^;

AGodofIrony - January 14, 2006 02:19 AM (GMT)
(Alright...sonicahero, be a little more careful grammAr wise on your posts. I could read it, but you were missings spaces, capitalizations, and a few weird things here and there.)
This is what you put
After getting the message from MetalSonic,Sonic decide to figure out why Eggman told him to get the Chaos Emeralds from hes base could it of been a trap?He was remembering everytime he had been trick by Eggman so sonic was thinking on who to take to Eggman's base maybe Shadow,or Amy,or Rouge,As sonic think he was just walking and wasnt pay attention where he was going.He found a clue leading to Eggman's Base and he said "I gotta show the others".

This would be better (Disregard the words in parenthesis for actual post.)

After recieving the message from Metal Sonic, the blue blur (Try not to put two similar words right neext to each other) decided to figure out why Eggman told him to get the Chaos Emeralds from his base. Could it possibly be a trap?

He was remembering all the times he had been tricked by Eggman, so someone else would be nice. Who would come though?

Walking outside, he stumbled upon a clue, He picked it up and grinned, "I gotta show the others!"

(Sailor N. Grammer wise you were good, but you need to work on your dialouge. Amy wouldn't be THAT excited, so put spaces, and 'where's Sonic' not weres Sonic'. Also, try to put it a little longer then that.)

000

Metal Sonic returned to the base, and looked up at Eggman.

"The message has been delivered," Metal Sonic informed the mechanical genius.

"Excellent! Let's see Sonic get out of this!" Eggman laughed, turning around and continuing his preparations.

Cojo - January 14, 2006 03:56 AM (GMT)
Shadow the hedgehog strode out of the field. Shadow had no need for sleep. He was after all the Ultimate Lifeform, but Shadow had learned from his best friend Nite (who I think wont be in this Rp) that sometimes you just need to relax. So lately shadow had started to take some short naps to conserve energy. Shadow started to jog, as he enjoyed doing. He thoughts wondered off to his so called "friends". Whether or not they trusted him didn't matter. Shadow had all that he needed. A best friend, a Chaos Emerald, and all the powers in the universe. Yup, the only thing Shadow was missing was his memorys. But he vowed to get them someday. Shadow's thoughts again drifted to Sonic and his crew. So he started to run toward Tail's workshop to see what was up.

J0HA - January 15, 2006 08:25 PM (GMT)
Rouge was casually flying aimlessly, taking a break from her jewel stealing when she saw a blue figure fly off in the direction of Eggman's base.

"Sonic? Heading to Eggman's by himself?" The bat scratched her head. "Not likely."

Rouge decided to head off to look for Sonic since this would be bugging her for a while; even if she had better jewels to ste-- I mean, better things to do.

sonicahero - January 16, 2006 12:30 AM (GMT)
As Sonic was trying to find the others all worried he had a weird feeling that he was being follwed or was being look for.
He saw Rouge flying around him like she wanted to find him so sonic said" Hey Rouge I found a clue to Eggman's base".
As Rouge flew down sonic said I stumbled over it when I was walking out side and wasnt paying attention where I was going. ^_^;

Sailor N - January 16, 2006 02:19 AM (GMT)
Amy Ran after sonic with AMAZING speed. When she found him, she leapt at him with AMAZING high volocety. "SSSSSSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOONNIIIIIIIIICCCCCCCCKKKKKKKKKKUUUU!!"*is shot*

Cojo - January 16, 2006 02:35 AM (GMT)
(Sit down AGOI, I'll handle this one)

QUOTE
Ok guys first off dont add those little tidbits at the end of your posts. *is shot* and the smilie just signify that you either didn't know what to post or you are unconfident about it.

Remember this is like a story so turn your posts from this:
As Sonic was trying to find the others all worried he had a weird feeling that he was being follwed or was being look for.
He saw Rouge flying around him like she wanted to find him so sonic said" Hey Rouge I found a clue to Eggman's base".
As Rouge flew down sonic said I stumbled over it when I was walking out side and wasnt paying attention where I was going. 
Amy Ran after sonic with AMAZING speed. When she found him, she leapt at him with AMAZING high volocety. "SSSSSSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOONNIIIIIIIIICCCCCCCCKKKKKKKKKKUUUU!!"

To this:
As Sonic was running back toward Tail's workshop, he suddenly had the feeling that he was being watched or followed.  Sonic glanced up and came to a stop. Up over his head was Rouge the Bat."Hey Rouge, come here for a second, I found something relating to ol Egghead." As Rouge flew to the ground Sonic said."While I was running, I stumbled over this." Sonic sweatdropped and laughed a little bit. "I guess I wasn't paying attention.

Amy had been running after her little Sonikku. Eventually, Amy would catch up and finally catch that hedgehog. She saw him stop for a second and decided to spring to the opportunity.Amy ran foward and tackled the hedgehog into the ground, playfully as she said."SSSOOOOOONNNNIIIIKKKKKUUUUUU!!!!!". The two tumbled over each other and finally Amy landed on top. "Hi, Sonikku. Whatcha' doing?".


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Shadow heard a familiar scream and ran in the general direction of the voice.

AGodofIrony - January 16, 2006 03:35 AM (GMT)
Thank you, very, very much Cojo.

Yes, you shouldn't add those things at the end of your post...Very annoying.

-Actual post- (Very short.)

"Good! You've delivered the message Metal Sonic. Now all we do is lie back and wait for them to get here! With all these different zones in the way, they'll be lucky to reach here!" Eggman laughed.

Metal Sonic nodded as well, and turned to sleep mode to wait.

Crystal - January 16, 2006 03:59 AM (GMT)
Knuckles was busy relaxing on a hill of grass, letting the sun wash over him. He had fought his fair share of battles and he deserved a vacation, dangit! He put his hands behind his head and sighed. Though....the adventures were fun to go on and true tests of his skill.....

Loud voices drifted over the hilltop. Knuckles shot up. They were here? With only a red blur to mark his passage he rushed up to Sonic and his friends.

"Hey, Sonic, what's shakin?"

(how did I do?)

Cojo - January 16, 2006 04:05 AM (GMT)
(Very nice. I like how you described the stuff. Nice grammer too.)

Shadow saw Knuckles rush up and decided to stay hidden in the Shadows. Shadow had never been excepted by more than a few people, and he still didn't know if they trusted him. So he slipped into the shadows and watched.

BlueRush - January 16, 2006 05:51 AM (GMT)
QUOTE
Hey, peeps! Just popped in to say, nice goin' so far! But if you're going to post long peices of review, which you can't really put in (()) or in Signups, you should probably put it in quote boxes like this one, and color it yellow to stand out if you're feelin' snazzy!
Also, BIG sigh of releif for Crystal. ^_^ You HAVE RPed before. Start reading SW2... those are some looooong posts, that's the kind of length you'd have to write if you joined. So just start adding a little more detail and stuff, and once this RP gets moving a bit I may ask you to take on a couple of characters more. ^_^ You're on your way!

J0HA - January 16, 2006 07:07 PM (GMT)
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I just wanted to applaud Crystal's RPing too XD Hopefully you start to read SW2 and join!


Somehow, Sonic found HER instead of the other way around, which she intended it to be. Rouge stood next to Sonic and glanced at what he was holding in his hands. She sure as heck didn't know what it was, but it's not like she needed to know. The bat already knew how to get to Eggman's base since she had past relations with the fat man.

"What's that?" Then all of a sudden, Amy and Knuckles appeared from different directions.

"Well. The gang's pretty much here. Joy."

Crystal - January 16, 2006 09:01 PM (GMT)
Knuckles smiled. He was all his old friends, Sonic,Tails, and.....Shock shot through his body like a lightning bolt. Rouge was here?! He didn't know why but this completely stunned him "I thought she ws still busy chasing after jewels," He thought.

"Um, hello Rouge, long time no see." He forced fake bravado in his voice so no one would notice his shaking hands or slightly quaking legs. This girl unnerved him for some reason.

He gazed back at Sonic. "So, whats with that?" He pointed at the object in the hedgehogs hands.

sonicahero - January 16, 2006 10:51 PM (GMT)
"Its a clue(I stubble over it)Leading to eggman's base", "but the other thing I dont get is why is he leading us to his base?"

("He must be setting a good trap!") "But we must be ready for what ever he's planning?''

J0HA - January 16, 2006 11:30 PM (GMT)
QUOTE
sonicahero, using parenthesis can get confusing. People won't know if you're using it for YOUR thoughts or your CHARACTER'S thoughts. It'd probably be best if you steered clear from parenthesis for your character's thoughts. Usin italicized [or however you spell it XD] text like Crytal did would make it clearer on what your character is thinking :]


Rouge looked at the echidna next to her. He seemed shaken up, but she acted like she didn't care.

"Likewise, Knucklehead. But what's gotten into you?" The bat asked, suddenly not looking forward to the answer as Sonic began explaining about the item in his hands.

"Who knows. He's planned huge things before, but he never carried them out no matter how many bots he had. I doubt it'll work this time."

Crystal - January 16, 2006 11:35 PM (GMT)
Knuckles fought to control himself and achieved a modicum of success. "Well, then we'll do as we've always done." He slammed a fist into his palm. "We'll beat him, just like old times." He smiled, also forced. He began to inch away from Rouge, as he didn't want to just fall on his knees as his legs felt like toothpicks at the moment.

He heard Rouge ask what was wrong with him but his tongue felt like sand. He couldn't bring himself to talk to her so he instead began talking to Sonic. "Why were you out here in the first place? Normally, you like to relax and just shoot the breeze."

GoldenSama - January 18, 2006 01:28 AM (GMT)
"Yeah, I'm tellin' ya Val, once I get paid we're goin' on vacation."

Vector the Crocodile, Leader of the Chaotix Detective Agency was on the phone with Vanilla, his longtime sweetheart. Suddenly another phone call came in.

"Ah, Val-baby, I gotta go. Gettin' a client."

Vector picked up the other line, but nobody was there. He looked down and he saw Sonic, Knuckles, Rouge and a bunch of others. He shrugged and approached the group.

"Hey Knuckles, what's goin' on?"

Crystal - January 18, 2006 01:36 AM (GMT)
Knuckles, already antsy, heard a strange voice behind him. "YAAAHHH!" He shot six feet in the air before coming down, landing on his face. "Owwww....." He got up and rubbed his head slowly.

"Hey, that wasnt funny, you-" He looked up to see Val. "Oh, it you Vector. Sorry about that, you just surprised me thats all." He dusted himself off and cracked his back a bit. "Ah, there we go." He gazed at the lizard.

"What are you doing here, I thought you had business with your agency?" He crossed jis amrs and gave him a suspicious look.

GoldenSama - January 18, 2006 01:39 AM (GMT)
Vector shrugged his shoulders and snickered at the echidna's antics.

"Hey man, agency's goin' great. Haven't seen Charmy or Espio today, though. I was busy seein' Vanilla... Val I call her. Heheheh. Anyway, what are you doing out here? Is Eggman up ta something?"

Vector struck a pose. "Then the Chaotix Detective Agency is on the case!"

He went back to normal. "And if not, then I'm gonna go get a bite."

Crystal - January 18, 2006 01:43 AM (GMT)
Knuckles snorted. "Always busy I see." He glanced at the chattering group next to him. "I guess there's something up, all I know that Eggman is up to something and we have a clue which we can follow." He shrugged. "If you want to help, thats fine with me."

He turned and walked back up to the group. "Hey, guys, my friends Vector is here, he said he would help us." He gestured at the lizard. "Now, what's the plan? My knuckles are aching to smash that fat man's face." He cracked his knuckles threateningly.

sonicahero - January 18, 2006 11:55 PM (GMT)
"Hey Vector,I'm jusy showing this Clue I found (well actully I stubble over it) but good thing y our here I can show it to you".

"But were ganna have to go soon to Eggman's base to get those emeralds back so we must be ready for any tricks",By the since how long has espio and Charmy not been with you"?

GoldenSama - January 21, 2006 06:06 PM (GMT)
Vector yawned with his huge green and yellow mouth full of razor sharp teeth capable of breaking metal or bone with ease. Then he looked to Sonic and Knuckles, his buddies from the past.

"Eh, I haven't seen Charmy or Espio. To be honest, Vanilla and I have been spending a lot of time together recently... things are getting serious." Vector announced his personal business, not really worried about Eggman since he tried this sort of thing all the time and never actually got away with it for too long.

"Well, c'mon, what are we waiting for? Let's find Eggman and smash him!" Vector grinned, again showing off his pearly whites. "We ain't got all day, y'know!"

sonicahero - January 21, 2006 10:04 PM (GMT)
"Vector your right lets go"! "But I think we should wait for Espio and Charmy after all the are coming right"?


"So maybe we should go now instaed they might catch since you havent been with them so let's Go"!


As the everyone was going to Eggman's Base fthey heard a sound.

"Oh my god! "it's a moster take cover"!
Everyone got behind a bush and saw something come out, but what was it?

AGodofIrony - January 23, 2006 01:33 AM (GMT)
(okay, first, sonicahero, you just can't put that they all went over to Eggman's base. It's going to be harder then that. You start off going through the forest first, okay?)

The bushes were indeed russling, and suddenly a form sprung out.

"Hey guys! How are you? Anything happening?" Charmy Bee asked, zooming out and flying around them happily.

Charmy smiled some and looked at the assembled group. "Hey, you gusy got anything to eat as well?"

Crystal - January 23, 2006 01:48 AM (GMT)
Knuckles had been walking along in the group, finally calmed down. He had managed to manuever his way so he wouldn't have to walk next to the bat. "Why is it that I'm so nervous today, sheesh...." He shook his head and kept walking. The forest was quiet and the echidna began to enjoy himself.

He loved quiet peaceful places and only nature could really supply those. He heard the bushes rustle and he flashed into a combat stance, ready to rumble. But he relaxe when he saw who it was. Charmy. "Hey, Charmy, long time no see."

He crossed his arms and glanced at the others. This was going to be an interesting trip as they seemed to be gathering an army here.

sonicahero - January 23, 2006 03:34 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (AGodofIrony @ Jan 23 2006, 01:33 AM)
(okay, first, sonicahero, you just can't put that they all went over to Eggman's base. It's going to be harder then that. You start off going through the forest first, okay?)


Oh sorry.

Sonic then said to Charmy,"Have you seen Espio Charmy cause Vector hasnt seen him in a while so thats why I'm asking you"?

"Well if you havent then we better go on,so we can get there sonner and crash Eggman for good so Let's Go"!

As they were walking out of the forest they saw something else come out of a bush,Could it of been Espio?or maybe Metal sonic delivering another message?
What could it Be?

NinjaEspio - January 25, 2006 10:27 PM (GMT)
Then Espio came out of the bush and said,"Hi guys I havent seen you guys for a while Specialy you Vector so how your date go with Vanilla go"?

"Well By the way what are you guys doing here are you heading to Egman's base "?


Cojo - February 7, 2006 04:43 AM (GMT)
(Note this is the actual Rp, so go post in the signups zone!`Cojo)

Shadow continued to watch the newcombers arrive. PATHETIC he thought. Cant even get a move on. Besides what is this clue? I have seen no evidence of one yet.

AGodofIrony - February 7, 2006 06:17 AM (GMT)
(I know...I should have realized that Cojo...Don't know why I didn't...I must be getting old at my age of 16...)

Not to far from our heroes, Eggman's Base stood tall and triumphant, looking eerily like a castle, as lightning flashed in the sky and a downpour rained all about it, even though only a few feet away from the farthest fence was a sunny meadow with many fluffly animals. Though those animals have their own story...

"So. It seems they found my clue! Excellent! Unleash the bloodthirsty robots!" Eggman ordered, pressing a button.

Back with our heroes, a giant paltform suddenly appearing from the ground, rising upwards with what looked like normal Eggman Badniks.

"For Eggman!" one of the robots bellowed, rushing forward.

Suddenly, all of these robots changed, gaining giant plate armor, iron sharp claws that were a foot long, and shoulder mounted laser cannons.

Unfortunately, this also made them slow, and the lasers didn't lock on, they just fired.

"Woohoo! Looks like fun!" Charmy shouted, pumping his fists into the air.

Crystal - February 8, 2006 10:29 PM (GMT)
Knuckles laughed out loud. Finally something to distract him from Rogue and his troubles. "Lets go guys, we got some robots to smash!" He charged forward, reckless as usual, at the platform. He didn't bother with a plan, he felt that he could just smash anything out of his way until he had beaten all the opposition.

He ran up to the first robot and slammed a mighty punch at its head. He hoped this would destroy the robot, so he could move on to the other ones. He was a VERY impatient echidna.......

sonicahero - February 11, 2006 07:39 PM (GMT)
"Heh Eggman sending robots to stop us HA"! "He cant stop me".

As sonic ran up to a robot he use a Strong attack that send it Far away from the forest.

"to easy,Now take this"! as sonic went up to another robot and attack but he missed!

"Dang it I missed,Theirs too many robots we cant take them on forever"!

AGodofIrony - February 11, 2006 08:28 PM (GMT)
"Time to have some fun!" Charmy grinned, flying forward, and easily dismantling a robot.

"Alright!" Charmy shouted, using his stringer to slice and dice. This was to easy...

(Feel free to dismantle these robots guys, I should have clarified!)

Back at Eggman's base/cliche castle, Eggman watched with glee at the battle. "Excellent!" he said with a grin, "They've taken the bait..."

DarkBlade - February 11, 2006 10:27 PM (GMT)
(Tails tries to dismantle a robot, but he just got his head hit while the robot was trying to get Tails off of its back.) "Ow!" Tails shouted, " Now that has got to...OW! OW! OW! Stupid robot!", *Pulls out wires and the robot is disabled until...*

"Self-destruction in, 30 seconds", a voice from the robot said, "29...28..."

"Self-destruction???" Tails shouted, "Oh no, that can't be good!" *Tails immediately jumps off and pushes the robot with his feet.* "Yes!", said Tails.

"15..14..13...", the voice continued, "12...11...10...9...8...7...6...5...4...3...2...1...*BOOM*

*Tails landed on the ground with a thump!.* "I'm ok!" Tails shouted, "I'm ok! I'm ok!".

Crystal - February 12, 2006 04:18 AM (GMT)
Knuckles ripped through the bots like they were paper. "Awwww, come on.....You gotta have more than that?!" He snorted as he kept pounding away, dodging an atrack here and there. This was ridiculous, these were hardly a challenge...was Eggman being funny? The thought angered him and he punched harder, even managing to send a robot flying into a bunch others, causing a big explosion.

One managed to get in and smack him, flinging him into a tree. He hit and then slid down, his eyes all dazed and swirly. The echidna shook his head furiously and then shot up, his eyes burning fires. "I'LL KILL YOU!" Then he proceeded to beat down the offending robot, but dragged out its destruction, until it was a pathetic piece of metal, beaten completely flat by Knuckles.

The other robots who looked on sweatdropped. This wasnt good.......

DarkBlade - February 13, 2006 07:06 AM (GMT)
"Oh my achin' head!", said Tails while his noggin is in pain, "I'm going to have brain damage! Will these robo...", his voice trailed off as soon as a robot approched behind him. "Why you little, piece of junk!", Tails said angrily, and slugged (means punched) the robot straight in the face. "Ow! Ow! Ow!", Tails said, and now his hand hurts, but suddenly, so far, that the robot was temporarily disabled.

"What the?", Tails said in confusion, "That robot was disabled? I didn't see that coming!!! :huh: ".

sonicahero - February 15, 2006 12:08 AM (GMT)
Sonic kept on tring to defeat the Robots but some were to strong to handle.

"Ahhhh take this!" As sonic gave a powerful punch to a robot.

"Dang if only I can keep this up and not get killed".

As other robots ran to sonic and started to attack,sonic then tried to hold them back.

GoldenSama - February 15, 2006 01:13 AM (GMT)
Vector charged forward at the robots, his powerful jaws open. He crunched a Eggman robot in his teeh and ripped it apart; then he spit the broken parts at another robot. Vector jumped down and swung around, tripping several Eggman robots with his incredibly powerful tail.

Vector stepped back, but was whacked in the back of the head by an Eggman badnik. He fell down and gulped, but he pushed up and grabbed the robot's head in his jaws and snapped it off.

"We have to do something." Vector called to the others. "Or we're finished!"

DarkBlade - February 15, 2006 04:04 AM (GMT)
Tails smacked down some more robots after awhile his hand recovered. "When will they quit?", Tails said tiredly. There's thousands or else, billions of robots to go! Tails thought.




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