Wassup guys?
This is a new story that will keep going, kinda like episodes in a cartoon. In this story however, you will see the main character turn into many people you'll recognize, from all over. Fma. Sonic. Sk and Ws. etc. As a disclamier I do not own any of the characters he will turn into, But I do own the orignal characters. Yes his name will be Rowen, on my choice. Without further ado. CODEBREAKERS!
SPACE COLONY ARK....ER...A SECRET LAB. 12 years ago and 364 days
"Yes. Yes. He is almost ready. He will be unstoppable. The Ulitmate Creation. Superior to the rest of his brothers and sisters. Our little creation."
"You have said that about the other experiments, you know."
"Yes. But this one will be different. He has superior powers, with superior motives. No one will be able to stop him. The Ultimate creation, will be The Ultimate warrior. Unstoppable in battle, Unbeatable in fights."
A Group of 12 scientists were huddled around a stasis tube. Inside a human shape was beginning to take shape. These 12 scientists were working in secret, creating lifeforms. (So orignal) Already they had succesfully made 33 other lifeforms. These lifeforms were more of alternates. Each had a power, but none were perfect.
However on this day, that would soon change.
As the scientists babbled on, one scientist was watching the shape. If suddenly formed into the shape of a perfect baby. It was a male baby, of perfect size, and weight. The baby had a strange mark on the back of his head, and on the back of his hands.(Which I will show you later)
"LOOK. He is finshed."
The scientists all huddled around.They smiled at each other. He was perfect....
Two Years later.
Experiment 34 truly was perfect. At the age of two, he had already passed all tests, He was acpable of independent thought, he was aging beautifully. However, since he was still young, he would not be able to remember much. That is why, Professor Scalivar had waited this long. Tomorrow he would be three. At the point in time, he would start to remember events, and places.(Or at least for me. I can remember back to my third birthday)
So that night, after experiment 34 was asleep, Professor Scalivar, snuck into the room, where he layed. She wrapped him in a blanket, and walked out of the rooms, the automatic doors makinf a soft WOOSH noise as she left.
He took the elevator down to the bottom floor. There he met his wife. Together, they would raise, the boy. Keeping him away from all the other 10 had planned for him to accomplish. They would make sure he was safe. They got into their car and drove off.
"He sure is a beauty, isnt he dear?"
"That he is Honey. That he is."
"What shall we name him? We cant go around calling him Experiment 34 all the time."
"We shall call him Rowen."
"Rowen...Yes, That is a good name for him. Welcome Experiment 34, Rowen, into our family..."
Ten Years Later
"HAHA, YOU CANT CATCH ME KARLEE!!!"
"I"LL GET YOU ROWEN!"
It was ten years from when Rowen had been taken.He was going to turn 13 tomorrow. Rowen had matured up fast. He was smart, athlethic, and different. His best friend, was Karlee Blume.
The other 10 scientists were ticked when they found out. They had sent out wanted posters for Rowen. Of course, he had been two at the time of the picture, and he didnt have a name.So Rowen had been safe.
He had grown up in a small community. His best friend, Karlee was into the same things he was. FMA, Sonic, Sk and Ws(Yep. They are comic book heroes!), X-men, and girls. Well she wasnt into girls, but she was overly-obssesed with boys.
"CMON Rowen, it's getting dark. We need to get home."
Indeed, the two had gone out for the day, to play games, sports, climb trees, swim in rivers, and now tag. But after a day of fun, at 9:00 at night, the two trudged on home, laughing all the way.That is until they went up the hill toward their houses.
When they went up the hill, their mouths dropped open, and the just stared, wide-eyed. Rowen's houses was on fire. And it was blazing away. Karlee just stood there, shocked. But Rowen ran forward as fast as he could. He reached his house, as it was blazing. He burst in through his burning door, looking for his parents.
What he found, would forever change him. His dad was on the floor, writhing in agony, his burning skin, peeling off his flesh. His mom wasnt as badly burned. She threw a bag at his feet, when the roof fell on top of her. This crushed her and she died on the spot.
As the whole place crashed down, Rowen dove out of the house. Amazingly he was not burned, but his clothers were a bit singed, and his face was covered in soot.Karlee came up to him, gave him a small hug cause he was safe, and then...
WHAMMMMM She slapped him across the face.
"WHAT WERE YOU THINKING???? YOU COULD HAVE GOTTEN KILLED!!!!!"
"I...I know. But."
"NO. NO BUTS. NOW Whats in that bag?"
When they opened the bag, inside was a huge pile of ruppies, a note, and some clothes for not only Rowen, but for Karlee too.
The note said.
Dear Rowen and Karlee too.
You are probaly wondering why this bag has been given to you. If you want full answers, go to the old house, in the next town. It will be a cabin on the top of the old hill. When you get there, knock on the door twice, and say Experiment 34.
Love always, Your parents.
They both stared at the note, neither of them knew what to say.
"Cmon Rowen, lets get moving."
Karlee went to her house to discover that her parents were gone. She left a note telling them what had happened.
They picked up the bag and started walking. Rowen said nothing with his eyes on the ground.
After a while Karlee spoke up."Rowen. Im soo sorry. I'll be here for you. You can live at my house. Our family will take care of you. We practically raised you.
Rowen said nothing.
11:50
Rowen and Karlee had arrived at the house. Rowen knocked on the door.
"YEAH WHO IS IT?" Said a mysterious voice.
"Experiment 34," said Rowen.
Several clicks were heard, ast the door was unlocked, and the two were ushered in.
"So Experiment 34, what brings you, and your friend here?"
Rowen and Karlee looked around. They couldnt see anybody else, but the man was looking at Rowen. "ME?"
"Yes who else would I be talking to Rowen?"
"Whats experiment 34?"
"Why you of course...or did your so called parents never tell you?"
"Tell me what?"
The Old man smiled. He brought them into another room and had them sit down.He then pulled out photographs of the lab. 12 years ago. Pictures of a baby being created. Pictures of all the scientists, including his mom and dad.
"Wha-I dont understand,"stated Rowen.
"Then I will tell you. You see Rowen. You are not a natural born child, but instead are a genetic creation. You have been created by me and 11 other scientists, on an island in the middle of a lake that will remain unnamed for now. You see, we were trying to create an Ultimate Warrior. YOU are the finished product. You are called Experiment 34, because you are the 34th lifeform. You are also the only perfect one. But when you were 2 years old, you "PARENTS" and I decided to save you. Save you from a path of destruction. So we took you out of there. Your mom and dad, took you away from the island, and I then followed a day later. We have lived in seperate towns to watch over you. But Rowen. You are different. You are not a normal human. You will be able to unlock powers, you only dreamed possible."
"What do you mean by that?" Blurted out Karlee.
The old man smiled,"You'll see in 5-4-3-2-1...NOW!"
"HUH?"
The Clock struck twelve, and suddenly Rowen started to flash Green. His whole body turned green, and he was lifted up into the air. The Old man started to laugh, while Karlee looked on in Awe. Suddenly, Rowen burped, he burped out this green light that shot out of the house. It was impossible to count how many were sent out. But, there was more than 1.
Suddenly one of the lights landed on Karlee. She was enclosed in a circle of light. When the light faded, Rowen fell to the floor, and the scienitsts stopped laughing.
"As you can see, you are not human. At the age of 13, your powers were designed to turn on. You see your powers are unique. Unlike you failed brothers and sisters who have only a set number of powers, yours are unlimited. You have these things called Codes. The codes exsist in series. Right now you are on series 1. When all the codes from series one is filled up you will go on to the next one..."
"WHAT THE HECK DOES THAT MEAN!?" Karlee yelled.
"Tell me dear girl, have you ever played the Sonic The Hedgehog games?"
"Yes, me and Rowen play it all the time."
"Tell me girl, who is the main star of the series?"
"Why Sonic, of course...."
Suddenly Rowen started to twitch. And all of a sudden, his back was straight and his eyes turned bright green. He gave a big smile, and started to run around the room, at Super Sonic speeds. Karlee looked stunned, The man continued on.
"See. You have codes. These codes will change you in many ways. They will give you a new personality, a new lifestyle, and above all else new powers. Each series has a set number of topics. Series 1 includes Sonic, Fma, Sk and Ws, and Halo. As for you girl, that light that overcame you made you a code master. All over the world, those lights changed simliar people into Codemasters, and gave them the knowledge Im giving you."
"What....DOES....THAT....MEAN...FOR...ME????????" Rowen was running so fast his words were seperated by several seconds.
"It means, my creation, you are now at the mercy of this girl. See until you complete a series, the only person that can turn on and off the codes are codemasters. You cannot go out of the codes on your own will. Either a codemaster will change the code, or eventually the code will wear off."
Indeed, suddenly the Sonic code turned off. Rowen's eyes went to purple again, and he stopped running.
But Im afraid their is more that you need to know. You see one year ago, when your brethren got their powers, they burst out of the island. Now they are after something that will grant them powers. And you have to stop them."
"HUH?" Said Rowen
"HUH?" Said Karlee
"The Densetsu Stone. A stone of unspeakable power. Translated it is called the Legend Stone. The reason they want the stone is for what the stone does. The Stone will 1. Make you a complete human. 2. Give you a couple wishes. 3. If you use it correctly, give you Ultimate powers you can't comprehend. Now Go Rowen and Karlee. Find the Stone, find the codes, and keep each other safe."
The two looked at each other and asked,"Where do we go now?"
The old man smiled. He reached into a chest beside him and pulled out a map."Travel to the town of Risenbop. There you will find a clue. Now go, and complete your destiny."
Well what do you think. Sorry it was kinda long and didnt have any action yet. But this was more of a Prologue. Be honest, did you like it? Hate it? Im interest in opinion and *sigh* critque.
I actually havent decided what universe to have this in. I'll let you guys decide that.
Also I am takinf requests for what codes you want seen. I have a list of available codes, but basically anyone from Sonic, Fma, Sk and Ws, and Halo are in it.
So peeople of the rapidboard. What do you want to see next?
Very good story, Cojo! ^_^
Interesting premise regarding his powers: he can take on the abilities of video game characters using people called "Codemasters." The idea of his 'brothers and sisters' having just some of his powers opens the door for some interesting interactions later. However, you hit the nail on the head with the "how original" thing: since the basic, basic scientist-making-thing premise was kinda usual, you could use a unique reason for WHY they're making these people to make it more original.
Other than that? Well, I'd be a little bit more sad if my parents died in a random fire... instead Karlee didn't even notice her parent's death... if they died. I had to go back to check that her house burnt down too. I understand the slapping thing is part of her personality, but come on: the dude's parent's just died, and so did hers! That scene was a little rushed.
Otherwise, very, very good. ^_^ This should be interesting.
Thanks for the comments Br.
I fixed what you said, cause I found out that I had accidently copied the writing wrong. I forgot to type in where Karlee went home, and said sorry to Rowen. Well fixed that.
So yeah. I have a storyboard pretty much made up. For the most part though, and code can be used. So if you want Rowen to turn into someone specific, I'll turn him into that. I will update soon, thanks for reading!
Nice start Cojo. I like it.
BR already did the critisims, so I won't bother. It sounds like a good start, and I'm curious to see where it goes.
And you used Densetsu Stone! XD Wonderful!
More. Ya?
I cant.
First off I know nothing about.
Second off it does not qualify under the categorys of Sonic, Halo, Fma, or sk and Ws.
Just an update for yall. I have a good friend of mine drawing some pics of the characters and whatnot. As soon as they are done, next chapter will be posted!