Umm...I'm making a fic and here's a teaser trailer for it.
Can you help me on a name please?
Chara's belong to there respitive owners, balh blah.
What happens when an evil emerald posses the Tails Doll?
(A large, purple emerald glows as multi-colored threads cover the Tails Doll)
A maniacal doll, that's what.
(The Tails Doll throws back his head and appears to be laughing)
Now an unlikely band of heroes must work together to defeat this doll
(Sailor N, Jack Spicer, Omi, Raimoundo, Kimiko, Clay, Dojo, Lite, Poki, Neogeo, Cure White& Black, Bomberman, Inuyasha, Kagome, Sango, Shippo, Miroku, and Chibimoon are shown in that order)
Sailor N: SHUT UP!
Jack: No, you shut up!
Sailor N: NOT UNTIL YOU SHUT UP!
.
Well, I said unlikely, right???
Dojo: CONUITE WITH THE NARRATION DARNIT!
Fine.
But the Tails Doll is not alone.
(The Tails Doll floats up, and Naruku, Wuya in human form, Chase Young, Sessamaru along with Jacken and Rin, Queen Nelehelia, Mistress 9, and Katnappe are shown below him)
Will they defeat The Tails Doll?
Only time will tell
Well...I shall be honest...That's a lot of characters to deal with SN. I have trouble juggling around some many different characters from different things. My huge crossover has pretty much shut down, cause I'm having to many sub plots at once! You'll need to be careful, and it's hard to keep them in character. Best of luck to you though.
Also a recommendation... try to keep out needless interruption sections, like this:
| QUOTE |
Sailor N: SHUT UP! Jack: No, you shut up! Sailor N: NOT UNTIL YOU SHUT UP!
. Well, I said unlikely, right??? Dojo: CONUITE WITH THE NARRATION DARNIT! Fine. |
It makes no sense, it isn't funny at all, and it kills all the flow you might have.
Good luck with the fan-fic, though.