chapter one:Nopracew Naw for short awakes one night to see a strange comet glowing in rainbow shades. After stareing in to it for 5 minutes he found him self in a forest surounded by trees, he notices ones a mirror. When he looks into it, he is shocked to see rainbow bones going down his back and he notices a tri tipped horn on the back of his head. Very shortly he sees a green blur and followes. The blur leads him to a empty field. Even though the blur stoped it was still a blur. Then there was a flash of light and a green hedgehog appeared. She appeared to be no older than 13. Carefully Naw moved toward the green hegdehog. The hegdehog suddenly said hello my names Glow and you are?. Naw said uh my names Nopracew the slingharian [a race of lizards with human features] but you can call me Naw. Glow said a slingharin now that rare seeing as how your race is considered extinct. Naw said nope we just keep to ourselves. Glow:huh okay then well I'im going inside now. Naw:inside? We are in a empty field. Glow:the doors right here,and she pulls open a invisible door. Naw:what the chao?! Glow:huh you didnt see the handle? Naw:no!! Glow:please dont shout... well its late you might as well come in.and they went inside. Naw did not see any trace of a her parents: Naw thought no parents is she a orphan?: Reading his thoughts she said no i am not a orphan. Glow:your in the forest of dreams I was created to watch this realm and ensure no one who is a threat gets in. oh and by the way while I look 13 Im 23. Naw:what?! Glow:please dont shout! Naw:sorry. Glow:thats ok. Naw: How you know I'm not a threat? Glow:cause I can read your thoughts and I'd love to go out with you sometime. Naw: heard that thought did you? Glow:thats one of my powers also I can shoot lightning from my hands & can turn to energy & can deafen enemies with thunder. Naw:cool I can spew poison breath ,slash enemies from afar and summon an army, say why are we under ground? {to be continued}

May I ask, what is it with all these topics about barely-paragraph-long stories, that have so many punctuation and spelling errors that they are unreadable, that you have been making over the last few days?

Getting rid of mistakes depenend on your comments, but this one stay`s {chapter 2}Glow: it`s 100 below on the surface. Naw: and under the surface? Glow: 70. Naw: it was just a bit chilly a minute ago. Glow: the nights are coldest. Naw: wow it`s night? it must be lonely at night huh? Glow: no I have a brother called Darkaz the echidna and a chao called Grow. Naw: what your brothers a echidna?!!! Glow: yes and stop yelling! Naw: why? you yelled to you know. Glow: you`ll wake up Grow. Naw: sorry. Glow: go to sleep I`ll stay awake to greet darkaz. Naw: how can he be your brother if he`s a echidna? Glow: he like me was created to protect this realm we have the same blood flowing through our veins. Naw:cool well good night. The follow morning Naw was a waken by Darkaz & Glow. Naw: why you wake me up? Darkaz:we are leaveing get up Naw: why are we leaveing? Darkaz: we have to leave this a cursed realm today or tomorow or it will be 1000 years before we can leave. Naw:what?!! Glow: lets get out of here. we only have 22 hours before the realm gate will close. Naw: the what? Darkaz: the gate between your realm and our realm, that can only be opened by a hidden key, a key I spent my whole life looking for. Naw: your whole life?well lets go then. and so they rushed to this "realm gate" opened it and left, but high above the sky a voice said, so those morons think they can escape? a nother voice said yes master Aceaferd but there DEAD wrong ha ha haha ha. Aceaford: very funny cocreater of the dream realm. the second voice said I told you call me Leopardpain. Ace:sorry bout that i forgot. well lets leave and follow those stupid idiots. Leopardpain: it will be so great to kill once more.ace:I agree lets go. and with that a invisible door opens and they leave, Ace:lets get those brats

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sprinckel them like solt and peper







...When using script format, press 'enter' when a new person talks. :)

Yes, it gets hard to read the way you write it. :hs: It's teh rules-use proper punctuation and capitalization. ( Did I spell that right? Feh..)
And spelling.

{the last chapter of adventure one}The three come out near a certain hegdehog the whole world knows, wondering where the three came from he ask them if theyed like to come and meet his pals Naw:Sure. Darkaz:why did you say that? Glow:lets just follow Sonic Darkaz:alright fine. On the way to sonics house Sonic ask them were they come from but they won't say, then they find them self's at sonic house they go inside and see he has a lot of nice stuff. Sonic: the stuff one the rights all things Knuckles has found digging,the stuff one the left all gifts that had no return address it's all from fans,the stuff on the cealings stuff Tails has made. Amy: who are they? Sonic:wont say. Knuckles: Sonic you have to stop inviteing over strangers. Sonic:say you. knuckles:each time you invite some one over something bad happens. Sonic: not each time bout 70 percent of the time. Darkaz said to Glow lets go sis. Knuckles: adopted family sad in way. Darkaz:we are related by blood you stupid moron. Knuckles:what!! your related by blood! Naw: please dont shout. as he said it he punched Knuckles in the gut. Shadow: shut up. he said entering the room. Knuckles: dang your strong. Amy:no duh. Knuckles:shut up Amy. All but Amy and Knuckles left the room at these words. And as expected she started beating him up. Sonic:he should know not to insult her by now. Shadow;he never learns, hey girl go get Tails Knuckles will need a doctor and Tails as close as posible. be for he could react Darkaz kickes him in the head and he's sent flying across the room. Darkaz:her names Glow and you dont give us orders. Sonic: I'm going to get tails and cream and a few sretchers. Naw:what we do so wrong? Darkaz:I dont know. Glow: let's go. and they left for Sonic's training field.