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Title: ruin the hedgehog
Description: the greatest game ever


metro killer lens - September 2, 2006 07:02 PM (GMT)
{This is a story I heard from my relitive Aj it said to be a game that was never finised but I dont know if thats true} {Chapter uno: the hog wars}Fastforward 1 millon years into the future and Sonics last relitive is launching war on gun who has slautered all but 1 hedgehog, him self. his name is Ruinex the hedgehog. He's the strongest hedgehog and only hedgehog. 5000 years ago three hedge/bats clones created by prof.echolocal attacked the humans and wars ensued eversince. The hedgebats names were Uno,Dos & Tres they had human kid's and spouse's who they moved to clonar a clone only planet. 1000 years earler all the differt species were separated sad huh and got a single home planet. Now back to ruinex hes now on dailkau a planet thats been untouched for years. Hes thinking of a battle plan with Relic the echidna {a desendent of Knuckles} he unlike Knuckles is a genius. All the soldeirs who survived the gun armys death strikes are on the planet planning there last srtike on gun. Meanwhile on clonar three humans fall to the ground screaming in pain, as they inheireted there familys secret power. They were rushed to the hospital each one of them in a coma by the time they got there. There names were Unos,Dosmetrai & Tresanna that sound's familair you say? Well you know there family so lets flash forward to there 9th night in the hospital. Allthough they have been in a coma for 9 weeks they suddenly awake as though they heard something, indeed they did there powers were talking to them telling to telaport to ruinex and they obeyed. a flash of light and then they were right next to Ruinex who was not suprise to see them as it was he who called there powers. hello said Ruinex how do you do so 1 2 and 3 how are you. 1 said ok. 2 said allright. 3 said with a grin better than ever. we are going to attack gun and I need your help said Ruinex. 1,2 & 3 said happy to help master. good then find Sonic's invisible shoes there said to be hidden in the ark said Ruinex. 1,2, & 3 said yes master and warped to the shoes got them and warped back. Ruinex said quick but they got the job done to Relic with a glare so now you'll train them for the battle right? He asked with his replacement eye flashing red. Sure said Relic with a clear dislike of the humans. oh and said Ruinex to Relic I'd lose the mood if I was you. fine said Relic I'll lose the tude and he walks to the training room, istantly 1,2 & 3 warped to the training room and Relic says alright lets train your attacks. 1 went first and he threw a ball of lighting obiterateing the dummy gun army. 2 went next and destroyed the even larger dummy army with a wave of ice . 3 went last killing the soldeirs who had been captured last week without moveing a finger he had blinked and they were all burned like paper dolls. Well said Relic in shock you have ruined your orignals power records maybe each new gen is 100 times stronger than the last gen your true clones. Well lets go to bed and they warped to there beds at the same time Ruinex said to Relic lets attack in a week ok said relic raring to fight.

GoldenSama - September 3, 2006 01:52 AM (GMT)
MKL - Listen dude.

PLEASE, can you try to work on your writing if you're going to post a million fanfics a day? :hs: I'm really glad you're so active, but if the entire story is just one giant block like you've been doing, I know most of the members here won't want to read it.

If you space things out, and work on good spelling and grammar, then you'll get more readers. :D Then you'll be happier, yes? So we'll all be happier! :D



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