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Title: A Fanfic
Description: rated "B" for Bleachiness...


Dark Phazon - November 1, 2006 04:24 AM (GMT)
((This whole fanfic was originally to be an entry for the Halloween Contest, but I haven't come close to finishing it, so I can't enter it. I have probobly about 40-45% of the story written out (though not all of what I have currently written out is in this first post), and maybe, I might get it completely finished within a few more days to a week... And yes, I don't have a real title for this yet. I'll come up with something, when I'm done, maybe... Also note that I haven't proofread this or anything. This is a WIP (work-in-progress) release.))
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This is my first time ever attempting at a fan-fic with real intent to finish it, as well as make it comprehendable and follow a somewhat logical storyline progression...

Hopefully it won't suck.

Since it's popular to say this (even though it's implied by default due to this being a piece of "fan-fiction"...), I do not hold any copywrite or similar on the anime/manga series known to most as Bleach.

Here we go... Wheeeeeee!

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Chapter 1 - *Insert Chapter Title Here*


"It's been ten weeks since Kurosaki Ichigo and his gang of friends returned home from Soul Society, saving the wonderful Kuchiki Rukia from certain execution. She may not have returned with the group, but just recently, Rukia nee-san decided to finally visit her lonely friend who was trapped in the human world with the devil-herself when she was getting saved.

"Being as intelligent as she is, she used a cover story of 'recent powerful Hollow activity in the area' to get back to the real world to see me. But that is unimportant for the story of today, Saturday the twenty-ninth, at seven thi..."

*CRASH*

*squeaky*

"Hey! What the heck was that for?!" yelled a small yellow and brown lion plushie, getting up from under the alarm clock that was thrown at him.

Still in bed was the person who tossed the alarm clock at the plushie, trying to bury his spikey-orange-haired head into the pillow.

Unsatisfied by the lack of a response, the plushie jumped onto the boy's chest, and pointed with one of his paws at his face. "HEY! I asked a question here!" he proceeded to yell, now jumping up and down on the boy's chest, before being grabbed by the head.

"Today is a Saturday. That means I sleep in, and at seven-thirty in the morning, you don't go rambling on about the last couple months like you're writing a diary!!" Ichigo yelled before tossing the plushie across the room into the closet door.

"Actually, that's exactly what I was planning to do!" the determined plushie responded, jumping up from his landing spot on the ground. "I'll write down the entire story of your journey to Soul Society! Then sell it to a publisher, sell lots of copies, and get famous! And by being a famous author, just imagine all the beautiful girls who'll want to see me! And hug me! Ooohh!" continued the Modified Soul, holding his arms together, while picturing in his head the dozens of girls he was talking about.

By this point, Ichigo had already given up all hope of sleeping in, and jumped out of bed to chase after Kon. "That is the one of the dumbest ideas I've ever heard!"

Kon then started hopping around the room to avoid being caught by Ichigo. "Well, I was going to change the main character into a nicer person more like myself, and..."

"Will you two be quiet out there? I'd like to get dressed in peace," rang Rukia's voice from behind the closet door.

"Well Ichigo started it!" yelled back Kon.

By this point, all dreams of himself having a peaceful were over for Ichigo, now out of bed "Why can't you ever, just once, shut your..."

"Ichigo!! I'm coming in with your washed laundry!"

Now faced with Yuzu coming in and finding Kon, Ichigo quickly kicked him underneath his bed, just in time for Yuzu's entry. "Uhh, why are you coming in so early?" he then asked his sister.

"Well, I heard you were awake from hearing all the noise of you jumping around in here," started the young brown-haired girl. "So since you were up, I thought I might as well bring in the clothes I washed this morning. I'll just set them in your closet..."

"No, no! Don't worry about it! I'll put them away!" quickly responded an extremely nervous Ichigo. The one thing that would certainly make this awful Saturday morning even worse than it was already, would be trying to explain to his little sister why there was a high school girl locked in his closet...

"Ichigo, you're acting strange..." replied Yuzu, who then opened closet door, to find... "No wonder why you didn't want me to look in here. It's a complete mess in here, Ichigo!" Ichigo couldn't help but let out a huge sigh of relief, even with his sister was scolding him for the mess in his closet.

"Uhh... Sorry! I'll clean it all up by Sunday! Okay? Okay!" Ichigo quickly spoke out, ushering Yuzu back out of his room before she could find anything suspicious in his closet. Once he returned, he sat down on his bed, laid back on the bed, and let out another large sigh of relief. He stayed there for a little while, trying to catch his breath again, after everything that had been going on this morning.

The silence was interrupted though, by the shinigami in his closet. "Ichigo," Rukia started, from behind the closed closet door. "There's a problem with my spirit's sync with my gigai."

"What's that got to do with me?" asked Ichigo.

"Because of that, I can't move at all. So you need to go to Urahara's shop and get some souma fixers..."

"Sure. Whatever..." was Ichigo's immediate response. He normally would have argued about that, but his morning had been loud enough, as well as that he now had to worry about Yuzu more than usual, about her finding out about about Rukia and Kon... So he decided to leave that alone, and went out after eating some breakfast.

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In the swirling darkness of Hueco Mundo, a couple figures walked up to each other. "You will go for him," the shorter and more human-like figure said to the other, who just nodded...

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And that's the first chapter, ending with a little bit of foreshadowing, 'cause I love foreshadowing. Please review (even if you know nothing of Bleach, or absolutely hate Bleach; I'll take any constructive criticism anyone can come up with!), since I really have no clue what I'm doing! :LOL:

GoldenSama - November 1, 2006 05:01 AM (GMT)
Awesome!

A Bleach Fanfic! We need more fanfics. :3 Cool beans man.

It's a bit short, but I actually like the fact that it's short cause I can read it when I'm busy and not have to wait.

Pretty cool! Can't wait to see what happens next. So... more, yeah?

AGodofIrony - November 1, 2006 05:18 AM (GMT)
Bleach be awesome.

This is very cool DP. I really hope to see what you have planned for later.

Which also reminds me...I need to read more Bleach so I can get started on something...

Anyways!!! More soon, or whenever, long as it's your usual goodness DP!

DBOZGT - November 10, 2006 04:02 AM (GMT)
Wow dude that's a long post :LOL: :LOL: :LOL: :LOL:




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